Overall nice to read but is ultimately unoriginal and bland. It's a typical, 'oh wow new loot and random things which make the MC stronger'. A lot of things going on but no real depth to either the characters or world.
I gave this all five stars just based on the fact its soo unique i cant wait to see more of his novels.Also i would really like the author To write another novel after he finishes this one take your time.
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The junk food of web novels. ^_^Messy universe ! Horrible writing ! The main character doesn't even have a name ?! What kind of retard wrote this trash ! -_-*Turns Around * Oh wait that'd be me ! 0_0
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Its not bad and i quite liked it so keep it up and also i love the novel in whole! (Sorry for my bad grammar english was not my first language...) anyways i hope the MC isnt too OP just only enough. god i sound like a child XD
I like the story and overall direction it's moving, also as a cooking maniac I love how there are actual recipes in the story line (not very complicated for now but it seems it will change as the story develops).But:1. Needs some editing2. I don't like that there are special chapters that are accessible only by patreon readers - spirit stones also cost money so... fortunately they seem to be 99% ***** only content so it's not necessary to actually read them3. CARINA - started ok as she is only 13-14?, so he treated her as a kid, differently to Clara and Claire. But around chapter 190 (don't remember exactly, not gonna check) things change. Story line suggests that she thrown herself at him - little things that an actual kid might do, (can you kiss me, hugs, etc). He's older, he should know better and curb her enthusiasm, instead he ends up with his hand in her panties to check if she's wet - BLEH. It's like 2 years and he has 2 different girls and a fiancee.4. Also di*kish move sending your 2 lovers to serve and befriend your unsuspecting fiancee.5. MC seems to shine brightly among other people, but it only because most characters are to stupid to live, incapable of development. Lack of new ideas is passable in the storyline, but incapability to improve on old ideas seems improbable for the level of development the civilization in the story reached. If they are such dumbos their development should be more at a level of 10-11th century Europe not 16-17th.Still with all the above I'm still reading.
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I like it, sometimes they mess up the gender when talking about people. But I’ve seen that happen a lot in other stories. Honestly one of my favorite reads from the past couple pilot reads.
This is a copy of another novel with the same name. Didn’t even bother to change the cover. I will now 1 star all of your stolen novels. Imagine stealing IP. You don”t even translate them. You just steal them from other sites.
This story is quite nice.Don't be afraid at the beginning about how most of the story is him upping his skills, you see it less often the further you go.It is quite a light-hearted novel and is simply nice to follow, the MC isn't a shameless brat, nor is he conceited thinking he can take over the world.I recommend it to those who wish to read a nice and cool story, without much drama and such.
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