Keep going author. 2 of your novels is in my library so keep going. and I love the star wars fan fic novel of yours. The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.just a additional word count.
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I love it, but some words are misspelt so I'ma just tell you which ones and you can fix them on your own time, but either way never drop this because I have been looking for a Scp fanfic but all of the others are just trash(my opinion) so keep working and if I enjoy the next chapter I'ma be sure to give you stones ??
I have read all 40 chapters available. This is an excellent sci-fi novel with good world background and character design. There are very few novels under this genre with such details and story development. The pacing of this story is also well. I hope it gets picked up as I rarely find such interesting novel of this genre on this site.
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The novel is quite good despite being in its early stages, but there's one thing that ticks me off a little. It's the fact that some scenes in this novel are a little bit too similiar to scenes in I'm not a Regressor. Dunno if it's just me tbh. Anyway, the novel is promising.
Hello! Author here! Honestly, I don't know what I should write. Since I am author, it's obvious that I would exaggerate a bit :D Well just look at the score ^^ So let's go with some info! English is not my first language, I am sure that's noticeable. I hope that story is at least at the 'readable' level. Then, it's my first time writing a story. You know, I am quite a lazy person, so writing everyday to provide at least 1 chapter a day is hmmm I would say nice training to cure my laziness. Anyway! I hope you guys are enjoying IRTD!
Story is good and is sent up to really develop in the future, however I’m 35 chaps in and the mc isn’t using his reincarnated advantages. Like I get that he’s 5 yr old but he should be trying to do more. ie read, sign contracts, etc
inconsistent is how i would describe this story . Main character says something but does something else He wishes to stay out of trouble but gets himself into it. Tries to sacrifice his life for school in which he has 2 friends he has known for a week or so ? Condemns slavery and goes to burn their business yet talks about that he is weak and should stay low. Don't read unless you are into japnese white knight novels
just want to help fix the rating on this amazing and hilarious book I've managed to stumble on. Read it. It's funny. Please?.......................
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A poorly written good story.There are too many grammar and present/past tense mistakes. Sometimes the phrase won't have any meaning and you'll have to try to guess what the author meant.As for the story he usually rushes with the story part but is really slow and descriptive with the crafting part, which some might like and other might think is tecnobabble (like me).Nevertheless, these rushed parts are still interesting and coupled with the MC upgrade ability, made for a nice story. The author should cut a little on the crafting part and improve more the plot with interesting events in the sect with other people or ****** more adventures.You should also add more challenge and stick to your power ranks. The MC wins too easily and too over his own level. Him as a rank 1 killing rank 19 is quite ridiculous and undermines your own system.Also there are some really stupid plot devices like Strong Cultivators not interfering in an attack on the city by bandits because it's an attack made by the young generation and they don't want to get involved because of pride, the old can't fight the young or something. I facepalmed when I read this and almost dropped.