PrimordialDesolate
So two things.
Seriously, I skipped through a meeting, but I didn't skip through this one?
"Good, now, let's start." I put my hand in front of Flandre.
"The MISSION IS ACCOMPLISHED, hahahaha, because of everyones help, we clear it in only 2 days, now that we have Map Function, gathering materials will now going to be easy." Adam pause for a moment before he continue.
The bad feeling I had faded. "Then even with the deadline, until I have a child, they can't touch that money for more than a decade."
"WHY IS THERE AN EXTINCT CROCODILE IN A SWIMMING POOL!?"
The phoenix flames quickly covered each part of the pups
Nice It based on Ohio I really like the MC
A shameless review from the author to boost his novel! I hope you enjoy the story. I promise you won’t find it boring. Reach at least the last free chapter to see what it is all about. Let’s fight dragons with mechas! ps. This isn’t the futuristic style of mecha but instead, magic and compatibility. The development of creation of mecha and the mecha system will be fluid.drop your questions here, i’ll do my bed to answer them!
This is the best kingdom building genre story I have read on this platform, so far.Now, star review:writing quality- Unlike most stories consisting kingdom building and mmorpg genres, it doesn't have any name inconsistencies, and the grammar is good. Although, there is need for some editing, as a every other sentence, especially in later chapters, have jumbled up words. I know that it sounds contradictory to the 4- star that I have placed, but the point is that this simple mistake still doesn't take away from the story and its depth.story development- I have read till the latest chapter, binge read. I am so glad that the comment I made in the first or second chapter in regard with the sects and hidden families, hasn't proven to be true. I am also very happy that there is no annoying and unnecessary young master or mistress character yet. There is no dumb unnecessary face slapping trope yet. The characters are nicely fleshed out, and yet shrouded in some mystery. The MC is not out right dumb or edgy and evil af, he has his own ideals and got some good advisors to help him. Most importantly, there is no xia country forced into it, although there are many characters taken from chinese background, at least they are genuinely helpful and not like everything that has happened on this earth, is or was done by se chinese dude, I also like the inclusion of different cultures and there famous characters. Character design- Same as above.Updating stability- As I have written- I have binge read this book, hence, I am not sure about this. Though it shows 2chs per week.World background- This is like fresh breath of air, well not entirely, but still. Instead eastern empire and xia country, it has many factions and mc and his parents are from western front, at least according to knowledge provided till the latest chapter. There are still a lot of mysteries to be solved regarding the world background and it is enthralling.Finally I hope that this story don't get dropped or go on hiatus, and the quality be maintained pr improved.
So far the the story is mysteriously interesting, I can't wait to see the end of volume 2!!! And also love the new cover it's really pretty!!
Event with the rush ending, its still a great story. Wish that a bit more romance added for the next story, so that it will be more wholesome world of story ?thank you for creating this story for ur enjoyment?
