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The genesis portrayed so well and have already give me the vibes from their fight. It's flow was quite interesting which give me insights as if I was the player, Vanessa. She looks cool and awesome. I wonder what else discoveries she'll find on the game...heh ^^
I like the concept, but it really identical to the novel,"World Online" were mc is also betrayed by his closest friend in-game then wakes up a week before the game launch. But yeah, this novels good one.
In one word : excellent?The author of this book has complete understanding of readers of (web novel's) needs and thus publishes this wonderful novel for this majestic goal.?I like the idea of this novel so I recommend it to every cultured people on this platform.Keep up the good work author. ?❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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My disappoinment is immesurable in this one. the idea and world building is good and has a pontential but he ruined it by he's twisted fetishes.Mc development is none existent, instead it's a character regression, Author at start will make you believe that he's character is decent and have bottomline but you will get disappointed because author will slowly trasform him like those trash young master who will resort for blackmailing, forcing innocent women without those he can't get a love one despite having advantages like bs dragon pheromone or bloodline. And don't focus on getting stronger by cultivating instead focus on scheming to look like the mc smart but clearly fail it horribly because he's scheme is how to make all the woman he's slave and use them but instead get in trouble because how beutiful they are and need his saving. how idiotic his decision by giving his woman an world experience (example:he literally bring qin slave 'no cultivation just starting' and gaoling 'low cultivation' to an inheritance cave full of strong cultivator and expect them to protect them because of their background really? How idiotic that is. By the way mc cultivation is 1st qi condensation bring an weak woman to dangerous place considered a smart scheme of mc, I can only say Bruh..).Writing quality is horrible at start where there is to much repetition of words, sentence and plotline. The good thing around 300 chapter is it lessen the repetition of words, sentence and phrase but it still there. For plots no changes it's still the same.Overall this is a story of a royal dragon that hide to a mortal focus in scheming in how to force and blackmail woman to became his sex-slave, instead of focusing in cultivating and dominate his enemy through power or strength like a true dragon should act because of how prideful and arrogant they are they despite schemer because for them schemer is for the weak, like a human excel at, not a dragon dominate through power( for me he does'nt ressemble any dragon at all, he should be a human or a snake it much more believable). And the title does'nt make sense royal dragon and phoenix? he's empress phoenix has no screen time at all she only show for snu snu, moral support and managing the background the other slave have more screen time and development than her who supposed to be the main heroined. Any way, there is still hope for this if author really want to continue on scheming atleast stop the blackmailing and the woman slave it's very predictable because i can predict his revenge he will surely make his brother wife a slave and fvxk her in front of him the same with his father nothing change like what his doing throught the novel.
Fang Xiang is my all time favorite novelist,I am taking bets here..I am willing to bet this will be QI most popular novel, overtaking other veteran novels like TMW, AC and LoHP.Anyone who read WoC, UGW can attest to that!Please give it a go! And that release rate, oh my!
It’s okay for a trail read.Interesting concept but the translation or writing style pull the weight of it a lot.overall it is borderline bad
The first 100 chapters or so are really good, with interesting characters and world design. The plot holes and unrealistic actions of those in this cultivation world gets progressively worse though, the author clearly understands how a cultivator world should be and tries to change it to make everything feel more modern both in the culture and the way everyone reacts. This doesn't work very well, it instead makes the world and the people in it feel shallow and dragged along by random desicion making. The plot and idea behind it is really good though and I was really interested in how it would go throughout the "Tutorial" he was in. But alot of the systems and feature are disregarded or make no sense and destroy the story. My biggest gripes were the loyalty system and how he supposedly rewrites the " yin slaves" memories but that left their personalities cause otherwise they would be boring. WHICH the author correctly writes them as just that, slaves with no control but some personality. Later though the author has some character's completely disregard their loyalty stat and the fact they are yin slaves who aren't supposed to be able to betray or harm their master unless ordered to in extremely obnoxious and plot hole inducing stupity that adds drama and moves the story along by disregarding everything mentioned before in the story.All in all, the author somehow took a good story and characters up to the 70~chapter mark and then started adding plot holes, contradicting himself and making shallow characters that make random decisions that anyone can tell are forced into the story to make the story move in a different direction.
Amazing novel I know that some people will say is generic similar to others however since when this novels are not everything depend on the person that is able to enjoy you should read the manga to visualize the characters and then go to the novel tio bad that since last year they went one chapter per month hopefully the writer finish it fast