Short: The Story is vast, which makes it pretty expensive to read, but most of the time it is a good read. The Character makes a 180° somewhere in the early 100s Chapter but otherwise is pretty consistent. Lengthy chapters in the 600s chapters to artificially legthen the story.Writing Quality: The Author is often to forced in his writing, which makes Chapters not that good, but most of the times he gets it done right. After chapter 600 it started to get artificially extended explanations and descriptions. Which serve no real purpose (character or world building)Stability of Updates: The Author tries to hard to match with the requests of his readers to release chapters fast, this in turn did dimish the quality of his writing as above stated. It might be a lack of Editing, but chapters feel about 30% longer than they should be After ca. The 600s chapter.Story Development: The story developes on a steady pace, in my sight a bit to slow, espacially After chapter 600, with to many inbetween chapters that serve not much purpose. But this is not my choice, its the authors choice. This makes the story an expansive read tough.World Background: The World is vast, the author even adds more to it by a method of the System the Maincharacter uses. Is the World fleshed out? not even close, there are still so many Questions about Jin's world and this with 630 chapters into the story.
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It’s a must read! The world building and charter delevopment are well thought out. There is some translation issues but not many that hurts the overall read.
Seven has done some amazing work so far and, from what I have read of this new project, that streak of awesome bossness is not going to end anytime soon. Keep up the good work Seven and may the Seven Sages of seven millennia bring glory and honor to this webnovel.
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We need more brother excellent novel No mistakes so far the novel to my liking bro continue please do not fail us your fans ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
From what read it's interesting and hoping goes well, full of potential.Hmm, ??? so say the three wise monkeys.?????????Just making up room hear to post ? also come in xp give me give me hahahaha.
Giving a review after a few chapters , I read it and I would say the novel is actually developing nicely .I like the author's writing style. it makes it interesting .
Very short story...I didnt feel any climax to both of them...It really makes me sad that the ending doesnt meet my expectations...No love affair happen...in short nakakabutin at kylang sa climax ang story...
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Honestly, the beginning was not that catchy but since I really like zombie stories, I decided to give it a chance. As I was reading, I keep thinking about the scenarios I've encountered in other books or movies and can't help comparing them in my mind unintentionally. And now that I have read a few chapters of this novel, all I can say is "not bad" for the writer. Hope you make it better and more interesting by adding more twisted unexpected plots. Good luck. Fighting!