BertusSwanevelder
I love the story so far and hope you will continue writing this novel and not drop it i can see this lasting a long time and I like how you made the mc op
This has a predecessor novel in mtl... The title is reiki recovery, just search it.. It also a billion times talent starting from 10 or 100 times, I forgot.. The mc is an old man, also an old soldier of cataclysm war.. If you had read that, this one will feel bland.. I know, because I had read it..
so its like final destination then? the adjucator of death also has scenarios like these if anybody is interested.............................
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I love this so much (u2060┛u2060✧u2060Дu2060✧u2060)u2060)u2060┛u2060彡u2060┻u2060━u2060┻───▄▄▄▄▄▄─────▄▄▄▄▄▄─▄█▓▓▓▓▓▓█▄─▄█▓▓▓▓▓▓█▄▐█▓▓▒▒▒▒▒▓▓█▓▓▒▒▒▒▒▓▓█▌█▓▓▒▒░╔╗╔═╦═╦═╦═╗░▒▒▓▓██▓▓▒▒░║╠╣╬╠╗║╔╣╩╣░▒▒▓▓█▐█▓▓▒▒╚═╩═╝╚═╝╚═╝▒▒▓▓█▌─▀█▓▓▒▒░░░░░░░░░▒▒▓▓█▀───▀█▓▓▒▒░░░░░▒▒▓▓█▀─────▀█▓▓▒▒░▒▒▓▓█▀──────▀█▓▓▒▓▓█▀────────▀█▓█▀──────────▀
It’s amazing!! The character development and the pace of the story are very good. The story in itself is incredible. A few grammar errors here and there but otherwise it’s one of my favorite stories rn. Keep it up Author-san!!
Horrible story with no sense of balance in any way. The class is the worst of them all but in the mc hands it is a killing god and it also seems that the author has no clue on how a balanced gaming system works as he can easily kill bosses far higher in lvl than he is solo. Pacing wise is also bad as he is mass kills higher lvl mobs solo but is still only a neck and neck lvl wise with other top tiered experts. Only good thing I can say is that it is at least better than pieces of crap like Shura wrath and Shadow Rogue.
bad. .
Where is the fucking updates...Can someone give me an email of the translator or who ever have responsible for updating this great great great novel...Fuck i just reread at least 3 time already...
That list his not 10 years old...like someone I know.His name starts with letter A. . .....................................................................................................................................................
It’s very good has a lot of Potential my only complaint I guess could be that it’s going a little way to fast pace and should kind of slow down and allow the mc to have a better development himself and the other characters. Also better description of the scenes would be awesome but overall great.
im so excited to read this. this book is very different from the regular. im very interested to see how this book will evolve. hopeful that this is actually a good book tho. i really dont know what to expect tho.
