I love your story... my heart melted. Hope that you'll write more chapters author-nim! I love your story... my heart melted. Hope that you'll write more chapters author-nim! I love your story... my heart melted. Hope that you'll write more chapters author-nim!
I am on ch 135 so I feel that I am qualified to say some things. This novel is decent, but the English could use some help. Don't get me wrong it is still leagues above MLT, but there are some times where you have to reread a paragraph to understand what the author is trying to tell. There are some info dumps but not too many.
I just want to let you know, I haven't read the book yet, but I found this novel in the "New Novel" section, with over 200 chapter... xD Just thought I'd let you know...
This story has already been told...I have this same story by the same author in my library but strangely I can no longer access its synopsis / table of contents, neither on my cell phone nor on the computer, too bad.Although its chapters reach 146 this remastering has already surpassed it, in my humble opinion it should have the other one visible to other people and update it a little like 3 chapters a month, which is less than its paid remastering that only reaches about 40 or 46... a pity because I don't have paypal and the other method is not available in my country.The name of the story I mentioned?Building Warships in the Game
Locked fanfic. Do you even need any other comments? And locked since chapter 20... That's a new level of greed
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Wow. This is different from a lot of the others. It already was has some good story development despite it being nearly 20 chapters long. Nick Work.
Hello everyone i have started to write My original novel please go and read it i think you will like itNovel "That time i crossed over with Immortal System"and please tell what you think about it in review section
I will just say it..I will post this just to warn any inncoent readersThis novel contains at least three case of ntr so drop it if you don't want the sadness
The difference is in the plot. You can feel the loom of death in this one-room thriller comedy. One of a kind in a wuxia cutivation system setting.