Awesome definitely awesome the rest of this is to make 140 characters .
I wasn't expecting the story to pull me in so quickly! Great architecture of the world of Geneva! I hope to see more stories developed around the world building! 10/10 would recommend
it's a interesting story for time pass and u will like it
lecture agréable merci beaucoup de nous offrir la chance de lire
Good story and power system but the translation is a bit confusing sometimes
Bro this is epic !!! Not too slow or fast just perfect . I absolutely love it.
I absolutely love this novel which says something since I hate multiple leads.
before I keep readingdid he kill his 5 year old sister
Good writing quality. But I hate the MC. He is a psychopath and not a villain by any means. Hence I can't seem to relate to him . He has no qualms in killing children. ( Small SPOILER . He blackmails a character using a child as a shield and later kills the character as well as the child) . He also hides his strength and act as a weak character which I seem to dislike. I am out. Sorry
I don't like or dislike your story. Although I was disappointed that the story wasn't something special and was filled with cliches, I haven't anything overwhelmingly negative to say about the story.The MC is bland (so he's not overly annoying or great he's just there) the side characters are side characters.The world building is fine i guess.The reason why this story is a 2.5 (slightly below average) rather then a 3 (average) for me is the plot progression. Like I said the story is really cliche , and for many stories cliches are not always bad, but in the case of this specific story it's in your face bad. Things that should've been lengthened in small proportions for basic readers enjoyment like the 'romance' (if I can even call it that) happens way to quickly and way to forcefully. Also, yes I know the real world is filled with people who do things like *** quickly but this is a fantasy and not the real world. Overall before I go on a long tangent and bore the c-rap ( only way I can spell that without getting censored) i'd like instead to rap this review up.The story is not bad but it offers no memorial moments and I probably won't remember any of the characters names in t -minus 10 minutes. Yep already forgotten it.
Well this look interesting, i Will waiting for more chapter??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Such great novel, the plot twists r so good ngl , and aidan my beautiful kid glad that someone wrote sarcastic and sassy characters with some depth.jacob's pretty cool tho but i can't wait to hear abt chaseand ofc miss sissel is pretty cool too since she isn't the typical doormat glad that u wrote her with an actual personality.the story's pacing is bearable thankfully u're not rurushing the couple (❁ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈)◞Anyways it's a great novel i recommend u give it a shot