The writing, grammar wise, is fairly terrible. It’s all in passive voice, so everything sounds funny. It makes it less enjoyable to read. Honestly it seems to be on purpose to make the word coung longer. Even if English isn’t your first language, you have to actively try to sound like Yoda all the time. I think the wrong tense choice is also because of everything being in passive voice. Grammar aside, the story is wonderful thus far. Interesting magic system and world development. It’s not one size fits all, you have X tiers of power with X subtiers. It seems different enough to stick out, but not unnecessarily complicated just to be different.
Heys been reading for a while , and really not expected to like it much due to realism , as i generally prefer more fiction with magic reincarnation system , you know what I am talking about , but yeah it got me hooked
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story falls in line with usual second chance vrmmo stories. the writing and overall story however is quite good and enjoyable.only real downside for me is the grammar. it reads barely any better than a machine translation. if author could get a editor to help with his grammar this could easily become an amazing work.if you are interested in this genre of fiction I'd recommend adding to your library, checking in every once and a whole, throwing a stone occasionally, and when author finally gets an editor you binge read this like there's no tomorrow.
this novel was great, highly recommended for people wishing to enjoy a good story, the plot and action sequences are some of the most detailed i’ve seen so far
Mc story is absolutely illogic, he is just a fool. Author trying to make some faceslap but its absoluty not mastered. the 2 points come from translation quality and story updating (that’s also useless)
This is the most beautiful literature. I tagged this book to you all Nostalgic experience and ancient history fabulous. Read it and enjoy your quarantine
I am the Great Flame Alchemist Roy Mustang. The start of this story and the system feels weirdly similar to the Reincarnation in Another world as a slime. I love that anime btw so my review can be a bit biased.I love the fact that someone else picked up a system of this kind. It's one of the best out there and I don't understand why it's so underrated or why there aren't more stories relating to it out there. Anyway, the start is pretty good and I am ready to give it a chance.
Great story, but the author just abandoned the story. About halfway through the story, he starts threatening to abandon it if it doesn’t start seeing more success.
I hope you don’t drop this book
I want to read it but something's stopping me... I feel like I have to know something before reading it peacefully... then... can you please answer my question?
Yeah, I agree. The grammar is lacking, but the flow of the story is good. This is one of the stories I'm still reading so far. I hope you continue to do your best, Author!