Short chapters. it would've been fine if it weren't for fillers taking most of the chapters. the story is decent but again, there's too many fillers for the story to progress
Guys help me review this novel...I would appreciate that thank you
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Good piece of writing. I'm hooked into reading this. It is carefully drafted and the synopsis is eye catching. Can't wait for more updates. Keep doing you.
Interesting Novel....Amazing Synopsis....I am really enjoying and I can feel that the female Lead is being going through a lot...I hope that kevin will keep her happy forever.....
The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.
The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.
Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
I loved the writing style of author. I've started reading this book and can't stop reading. I recommend the book for everyone. Wish you best of luck author❤️
Writing quality sub-parStill not updated after 4 month Story development is mostly smooth.I have to say character design 6/10Not much of the world background is written.But still, this novel has great prospects if written carefully.Add more dialogue between characters, It feels like I am reading the report to the point. More dialogue will add humor to the story.A good novel has good humor, and a good writer has great comedy.
Excellent novel.. recommended for all modern world and food lovers.. MC is not smn who goes around making enemies but always faces the enemy with gusto. He makes a lot of friends and is very likable.. romance is very slow, but the MC just got out of a very bad patch of life and is trying to sort everything out.. hopefully the romance (and harem) will follow soon..
This story has such bad grammar, that it actually gave me a headache trying to read it. It also jumps all over the place and the story setup just makes no sense.
Not a bad novel but no strengh ranking is confusing it's like wuxia without cultivation i really coudln't understand if moves they used were powerfull weak or averange