I already love this book! It has a charming protagonist, a funny narrator and some cool game concepts. The worldbuilding is top and the main character feels so real... despite being a cat xD I don't know about updating stability yet, but I wish the author a great time with writing this story and hope he continues!
This is stupid. In the 8th chapter, MC receives a system reward called the Principle of Arrays. Suddenly he is provided with the comprehension of all sorts of arrays in the world. Too OP cheats provided too casually.
Everything that could be better with the story in my opinion I'm only in Chapter 13.First, you should download Grammarly if you don't already have it because there are spelling mistakes, "or" you could also use virtualwritingtutor.com.Second, the dialogue is weird. You would try rephrasing some sentences because it doesn't sound natural. This would be better for readers to get immersed in the reading.Third, you could try explaining more things because I kinda got confused about how he knew all this stuff.Fourth, you kinda add some unnecessary words in the sentence this makes it feel unnatural. Fifth, some of the dialogue is kind of cringe this is my opinion Idk if any others think this.Overall I'm liking the story so far.
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kinda felt bad abt Xu Yang, a nice guy outstanding and good looking and all. But he was beaten by a freaking cheat system user who was originally a loser with good looks.
This novel features a story where being is reborn as another life-form, the concept was well understood. The fusion and separateness of of the body and soul was certainly well explained. Highly recommended.
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I should explain that the human body has been doing this for thousands of years, it's called the excretory system. Perhaps the character's special power is two very good kidneys and an excellent quality liver. The secret is a magic formula called staying hydrated. Have you drunk water today?
Everything about the novel is good... but you destroy smut scenes either you write it right or you don't write it.. those who want to read them would not want to see mall and car and different stuff in there... i hope you will change it.. of you write it then write it right
The reviews for this novel is abnormal
Like seriously, a 4.9 rating? Looks very... Well rigged.
Will change my review if it doesn't get deleted and once I finish reading the translated and raw
the synopsis is different from the othe sign in novels as they just keep signing in a sect , this new plot is interesting and awaiting for the work✌
I ve read to chapter 12 and skipped to some further chapters and honestly I'm quite frustrated. What's the point of having a 'first life' and reincarnating in this novel. It feels like it's put there for the sake of having the word 'reincarnation' in the tags, we hardly get to see the Mc's feelings or ambitions from his previous life, what are his regrets? What's moral and immoral for him? There's a reason why most of these novels spend a great deal at building the mc's backstory. I'm pretty the author would explore the mc's personality further in future chapters using flashbacks or whatever, but at that point people would stop caring about his previous life