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Extremely derivative work with obvious influences from WoW and other MMOs. There is very little originality to this work. Maybe the author will come up with some twists but so far this is just the typical OP MC in a game world story.
I’ll be honest! I don’t know if is a original work or a translation but the story is good if you leave behind all the mistakes in the translation or writing??
I have been reading a lot of MTL stories so I don’t Have problems reading stories like this one!
Give it a try
when I see this novel I got interested in it it's my first time I see a kpop r18 novel and this novel have a system too, so i think this will be good novel.
don't let me down when I read this novel ʕっ•ᴥ•ʔっ
Author-san I believe in u! please give us more Chapters
Ok, It is a good read. The major problem with this book is it is not finished. I am actually really upset about this. Finish your stories bro
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The story is definitely interesting, I enjoyed reading it. A few minor no big deal errors but its easily overlooked since the story is really interesting. continue the great work !
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not here to add anything but you should put the novel in the fanfic section because this is a fanfic
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This is not bad at all for new readers....But if you had been reading chinese novels for few years you'll find the writing annoying like...1.) "One had to know that blah blah blah.."2.) "If others would know about this they will die at blah blah.."3.)"MC clicked his tongue at annoyance.... MC clicked his tongue and rejoice..." 4.) "The blah blah as if blah blah."5.) "She's so pretty, she has a cold demeanor, glinting eyes, pretty eyebrows, sexy curves, pouty lips, a unique acne.... blah blah" It's funny how female characters always are described so detailedly while the MC's description is just... a transmigrator who failed 4 times nd were granted a cheat just because...
why is there still no chapters . when the book is in trial read ............... ............ ............
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
