Pleaassse update the story!
The story is pretty decent with its's unique slice of life like beginning that is quite refreshing as it's not filled with drama, much to my liking. The pacing of the story is pretty good too. The farming and family like structure is pretty refreshing to read with a FL alongside the premise of a conspiracy running in the background.The writing quality like punctuations and spacing needs a little improvement but the rest is fine.
A bit of a missed opportunity with the
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What an eye opening for me. This novel made me speechles. I mean everyone except chinese in this novel is a bastard, retard, idiot, criminal, or maybe more extreme (animal perhaps). Iam not joking, everyone beside the chinese poeple is just like that. Savage.
Well i understand IF this novel only avaible for chinese poeple, but come on. This is International server for Qidian, yet the translator and editor publishing this kind of Hard Racist story? Really? Are you lost your mind translator? also for you poeple who is "ok" with the racism in this novel : Well, i hope one day you will feel it how to be treated like that. And you gonna cry like a baby, and i will smile here. :)
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actually not that good ...3* or so
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trash novel boring........................
Repeated grammatical mistakes, wrong words used.
Author needs a proofreader. Preferably a human proofreader and not a machine/bot.
Story is great, character is great, world is great. Just writing quality needs improvement.
one of the stupidest MC. I tried to read more cuz it was a bit unique but the stupidity of the mc prevented me. You can give it a try if you dont mind a stupid mc.
a trash story out of a trash human
This is good