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This is my first web novel and so far its very good, i am only on chapter 46 but i really like it. I got recomended to read this thru TikTok and i am glad i was
Ray is HUMAN!
He makes mistakes and manages to grow through them. I really hope you stick around and make it through the muddy areas.
It gets so much better. Also, I thank everyone that managed to drop a review and appreciate the fact that you're reading it but please get a little further before you do so.
I need more in-depth reviews
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RUC tells the story of Hao Ren, an everyday good guy living in China. One day, he decides to rent out the rooms in his apartment for some extra income. When his ad gets answered, he finds that his tenants are more than what they appear to be.
The translation quality is satisfactory and the use of English is fairly good. However, this I believe will continue to be improved on for a better reading experience. Chapters are also released regularly every week. The current rate is at 11 chapters and this may increase in the future.
RUC's plot develops at a steady pace; not too fast and not too slow. New characters are introduced during key points of the story so it's easy to follow. The premise is similar to many fantasy/adventure anime's where the protagonist happens along new comrades as he gets himself involved in various scenarios. Think One Piece but instead of pirates, you have your classic monsters, creatures and cryptids of all sorts. Sometimes, when reading a Chinese novel, you may find an issue where the author tends to repeat certain details again and again throughout the story. This rarely happens in this narrative.
As for its characters, they are pretty common when it comes to the fantasy genre. There's the standard vampire, werewolf, demons and etc. However what sets them apart are their weird quirks and personalities. This adds to the humour in the story. It'll be interesting to see how the ensemble of characters continue to grow and what unusual creature will be added next.
No fantasy novel is incomplete without its own world or world's in this case. The characters' adventures take them to various places on Earth and also out of Earth. Here we can see them travel into what looks like outer space. This gives it a Star-Trek like vibe so you have a mash of fantasy and sci-fi at some points of the story. It's an odd combination. On one hand you're dealing with creatures from the Victorian Era or even older and on the other, you're dealing with beings of supposedly higher order, which seem very similar to aliens. Readers will either like how different it is or find it absurd. One will have to read the novel to truly decide.
A few chapters of this book and I love it so much keep up the good work, I don't really like "system" before but book has made me to.
Yours faithfully kaiga_providence.
I Love 86, But I couldn’t find a place to read.
Interesting writing. There are lots of characters and world buildings that might be a challenge to follow at times. But the story keeps me going. Will continue reading
Excellent dream world with a gaming theme. I am thrilled to read this book. Pacing is cool. The storytelling method is simple and attractive. Waiting for next chapters...
Im really enjoying the story. It feel fresh with how he deliveries the writing. I also like he spaces the words out so I never forget where I'm reading. It overall makes the experience much better and definitely with more time I could see this being a number one book. Also African American MC me likey
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Hi everyone! This is 'Orange' and its my very first time writing a Novel and I am hoping to learn a lot in this long Journey..
In this story there no raincarnation, the mc have only one single life
A good read. But very low update stability.
Just that the stats take up a lot of screen space and is a bit annoying. Look into it for a bit.
