This novel can only be described as something that aren’t meant for human eyes.
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As a crazy person who read this story completely 5 times and on MTL. I am proud to say that it is one of the best villan stories out there as this was my first novel which introduced me into this villan stealing heroine and killing protagonist genere.
And a round of applause for our author here who is posting here so u guys don't have to waste your brain cells reading Machine translated stuff.
Overall the story and writing is great, but I must say that there is no character development, it looks to me that the character is just stagnant and having fun with girls. I wont say that is bad, but at least add some more interesting events.
No NTR or sharing women right?
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Seems interesting, I want to know more about this world.
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AUTHOR!!!!! THANK YOU for starting to write again I really love this book of yours and I was a bit disappointed when you stopped writing it
The mc is pathetic
has no self respect
kneels and knowtows to others easily even having no fault
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Author i dare you to delete this review
If you like Japanese stories, you would probably like this one. The story isn't bad, but it's just not my cup of tea. The MC is scared of girls and within just one chapter he steps back in fear of two different girls. I had one problem with the writing and that was the fact that the author kept referring to the MC as "the blue haired boy" constantly long after his name was known. It wasn't just once or twice, but almost every time he was mentioned. Writing Quality is 4 stars aside from what i mentioned. Stability of updates is 5 starsStory Development is 4 starsCharacter design is 4 starsWorld Background is 5 starsLike I said, it was good, just not for people like me.
Writing this review after reading up to chapter 31. I love sign-in and system novels, and this is one of the best I've ever read.The MC has many good qualities and the way he deals with situations is a lot better than other MCs I've read about. The author also writes women really well, which not many male authors do nowadays. The premise of the story is very interesting and unique as well, and I can't wait to see what the author will write from here!
I have been around the block for a while but i honestly dnt think this deserve it's current rating. .. .. The writing looks like the author is new to it, its not bad its just okay. .. but an okay for rank 7 isnt good enough might work for a new author ranking.
currently on chap 47 and i dnt think i can go beyond that. ..not my cup of tea. Like i said those new to web novel might enjoy this but for us avid readers this is trash no offense. I might be interested in reading your third book though
Its a great story and you have a great idea but i couldnt understand what was happening in some of the scenes. So You might wanna improve your english a little.