Another shop owner type of system novel! I'll give 5 stars on the concept itself and full marks for encouraging the author to not drop it even though some errors have been made.
Honestly, a very well written start for a Virtual Reality story. I 100% look forward to this book. Better than 95% of the novel on webnovel just based on the first few chapters.The story has a unique MC, Side-Characters, and plot. Truly see great possiblities from this book. Just make sure to update more ;)
would be a lot better if it didn't just repeat the same obvious information over and over again, these first forty chapters could have been 20
Nice book it's too much nice book I recommend this book it's nice book let's read it by enjoying the mystery and the ghost I highly recommend this book it's very nice
OH MY!! I really recommend this novel!! This cutie FL were different from other FL. So far, it was fun to read this novel....I just hope, everyone to enjoy this fantasy novel!! Ugh can't wait for another chapter!!:) BTW, i don't know but when she cursed, i feel like 'WOW THIS GIRL CURSED EVERYONE LIKE IT WAS NORMAL' but it funny duhh
good novel, lots of potential, 8 chapters at this moment but i already enjoy reading it a lot. mc its to my liking so far hope he keeps walking this path away from the authors who like monk mc and green prairies in their head. keep the flame alive and feast in your desires.
this is horrible written I feel sad for the translators who have to do this book. from the beginning it's human rights blah blah blah, then it's Tesla blah blah blah it's completely propaganda
I would give less stars if I could, stupid system stupid MC stupid concept all around just a waste of time on everyone’ part... ….
Story is great and the development is excellent. But i have a question do this have a...... you know ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) *ahem* snu snu, i hope there is
All the world building and mysterious of the story loose its lustre because of MC.
Mc is too blunt. He lacks uniqueness that makes a main character.
It gets irritating when he cant even use his brain for anything.
He is always like '"what do i do senior?". "should i speak senior ?"
everything that he do, thinks all came from senior(sprit in the ring)
I get it author said, story is slow-paced but this is too much .
After reading 150 chapters i can say MC develop from naive idiot to brianless puppet
Everything is good but i found it hard to follow due to the discrepancies present due to it being a mtl. Thats mot to say its not a good story, it’s all a matter of understanding. What i found difficult to follow were the characters mainly. Anyway thanks for putting in the effort to upload and correct mistakes.
Love this novel