It's almost amazing how these authors can come up with interesting concepts, and then turn them into complete trash, especially by trying to use "comedy".
The MC is worthless and has almost no agency, just getting carried along by every single other character. He had one decent idea, put a plan into motion, accomplished his goal, and then let all of that success be taken away by everyone around him because he's an idiot. Even that could be forgiven if at any point the story had elicited even a single half-hearted chuckle out of sheer pity, but it couldn't even manage that.
It's almost painful to read this story with how bad everything is, with the single exception of the MC's sister who had potential to be a bright spot in this wasteland, but then was dragged into the same garbage sabotaging of the MC like everyone else.
It's been a while since I've seen an MC so worthless that I wish they'd just drink a gallon of drain cleaner, but in this case it would actually help him, so of course it won't happen.
This book is definitely one of the best trial reads so far. The concept is really interesting and enjoyable to read. It makes you want to read more. Also Cthulu so that's 6/5 already.
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The story is quite good, but there were too many cliches in the begging.
also +rep for #NoHarem
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This is so different.
Mc
System
World
People(creatures)
Story
Abilities
„Plot“
Are all unique and nothing is cliche. Respect author.
This story about a MC who copy all the famous story (most of them Chinese) and movie..
It's fun and fresh.
Also unique...give it a try.
give it a go, it's engaging.
the character are fun to read, they take locial decision most of the time, the MC itself so far takes logical dicisions and the world has live on it's own, stuff happen even when the MC is not involved and it's interesting.
my only problem with it, it's the ranking system it can be confusing to know what better and what's worse when they say N-leve technique and what not.
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very very pumped up and basically that quote in the title is not that far from right the eyes does not hold the most power in the body instead its in the top 5 without are eyes we see nothing without them we can accidently fall of a cliff or even trip hurting our self or even hitting a wall accidently
This is very good and i cant wait for another update. The only thing i can say is that it seems like there is some disconnect between chapters due to the writing style maybe? but otherwise really good!
wow this story is so different the plot twist the characters the name the title everything goes hand in hand I would highly recommend this book and I'll be supporting your work wel done author
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