The story is great, more chapters to comes. I like your writing skills, and I like the way you put every details in the story. Keep it up. I like your novel.
I like the way you write it. I like its because its written in POV. I kind of like Rafe, a cool character for me in this Rafael Sinclair's Revenge book. It's nice :)) Keep writing
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the genre is so refreshing and the character is distinct, I cannot wait for their further development---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I was incredibly interested the first few chapters but sooner than I would expect I found myself dropping this Novel. Too many silly developments, in more harsh words the Novel just felt stupid, after saying all that I really don't hate this it's just not for me at all.
if the writing quality improves. It would be nice. the story is good but there are mistakes .some things happened fast ....................................................................
Nice book, I think you guys should try out the book called the legend of the glowing blue ring, its the best the author has made almost ten books now 6 or more will come out this week
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Overall this book lacks nothing
It has alot of creativity.
The plot has been done really well
And the charactera are pretty cool.
Keep up the great work but please don't kill draiken he still has alot to live for
Chapter 12
Thank you for you few people appreciating and anticipating my first e-book