HayateAyasaki
I love it so far can't wait to read more. great world building cuz I sense an economy. also I'm bad at reviews so xpppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this.
Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word.
It's collection.
What collection? Obviously add it to your library fool.
is this a huge harem?
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is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
Yeah it's me shameless rating five stars.
Great story. It has great potential. The part I like the most is that the hero isnt all powerful and all knowing. He makes mistakes. Hopefully the stories continues with the given quality. Only thing that bothers me is the update frequency.
Me: "Not a shameless review this time, after all, I am a decent man!"
Some readers: "Huh! Aren't you a shameless one? Again five stars."
Me: "Hey, don't talk carelessly. I call this
confidence!"
Some readers: "Confident with your story? Meh. Just another piece of junk in the web novel."
Me: "You guys are so mean... This is a good story. So don't judge me so early! *hmph!*."
Some readers: "With your writing skill, that is just like that. Tsk"
Me: "Hey, Why didn't you read more than 15 chapters? My talents improved afterward."
Some good readers: "You're so confident about your story, huh? I'll give it a try."
Me: "*sob*sob*You guys are so kind."
Some good readers: "So, what's the storyline?"
Me: "Let me tell you. This novel tells about the adventures of the main character with his Al( System). Finding the truth about his mysterious dream(A.K.A previous life) and changing his shitty destiny. Furthermore, there is a cold antagonist and OP loyal brother. Tsk *No spoiler*. "
So overall, please read this novel up to 15 chapters before thinking about dropping:)(:
Definitely, you guys will love the story afterward.
my first thought after reading the first chapter was " is this book versions of I, Robot?" but obviously it is not since i already read the book, 'I, Robot.' is this book as interesting? i will say, yes.
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Getting a Harry Potter vibe from this excellent piece of work. Very descriptive and brilliant use of words. Loved how the story starts to build up leaving mysteries in every corner. Well done, author!
the novel is very entertaining right from the beginning with its comedic style as well as it's plotline. it's a good read for a day off when just wanting to relax. Good work!
Hi, I'm the author. I'm just gonna shamelessly rate this book above 5 stars. If you are looking for a cold MC that you can connect to, this is the book for you. Also, feel free to comment about your thoughts on each chapter.
