Duckin hell is this
The story r messed, not recommended
Not very interesting. This is similar but worse than great Doctor Ling Ran. The MC is manipulated and is a pushover. The system is not very interesting. System is used as a reason for his fast growth but the systems functions are not very interesting, it is Just explained that the system teachers mc, there are no missions, no system stores or anything.
Yo I don’t usually do a review this may be the first but I have to tell you that this novel of yours has potential with just the few chapters I read it’s probably something new with all the cultivation and romance novels here
I have tk say the the chapter were so drawing to read that I could stop reading I got through half the book in a day. It was insane u haven't
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I liked the story in the beginning. And the idea of him being the son of a rich family was something different then the normal penniless underdog. But once the whole secret about him was introduced it just got boring. those kinds of forced plot twists just turn me off.
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The spelling made it hard to read. I couldn’t continue on. You misspelled words like “Athlete” and “nurse”. I know some people have trouble spelling, but you might benefit from an editor.
I really liked this novel just after reading first five chapters as the world building and character focus are great.
If you continue this it will be a big hit. I just hope you will not drop this.
A fairly unique concept of short but quite entertaining stories is not a reading for everyone but for those who like to discover small things this is their reading