Pretty good story and read. I can't wait to explore more of this stories world
This book is average at best.
The pros :
- The translation is ok
- The characters are interesting
- The interactions are entertaining
The pros :
- The chapters are too short.
Each chapter is so short that it feels like nothing substential happens in the story.
- The story is too long.
Seriously? 1100 + chapters and the book is still ongoing?
A slice of life with over 100 chapters is - most of the time - boring in the long run.
And it's the case here. So many unnecessary events( confrontations with the neighbours and other people) stretch the story . Plus, it becomes quickly repetitive.
- The antagonists.
They are too stupid. It's like aside from the Mc's family( counting the Ml as part of the family too), everyone is stupid.
This isn’t entertaining at all, as they serve to make the Mc glow up.
The ml is also a problem. He is ypur usual ice block. And even by 100~ chapters, we don't know about his motivations for marrying the Mc , and he seems to not have any personality aside from being cold and domeenering.
- The pace is slow.
As i said , by 100+ chapters , the story is still in it's early stages and this just feels like things are evolving at a snail's speed.
All in all , this is your average chinese novel about reincarnation in the 19s.
This book doesn't deserves that we spend coins on it.
Captivating, immersive storyline. Once the pace picks up I couldn't stop reading, eagerly absorbing the details of one man trying to survive a major disaster. Please continue the chapters, you've my thumbs up.
Tried to be somewhat honest here.
Love the story so far up to chapter 40.
I do have some things that irk me but let's start off with it's a perfect setup. love the twist and laughed at brother making a move. overall is a new take on something I haven't seen done and I really can't wait to see how it works out.
now the bad things.
like this post the grammar is not the best and some words are missing here and there. but I don't care much about it because Im worse.
the overall mc is kinda a big baby. he acts like he has no social skills with the female lead but he can act and talk fine to everyone else. he gets uncomfortable and acts a certain way that just doesn't come across as his normal character. now it can be overlooked but it's very noticeable and in many guy roles the character just doesn't fit. perhaps more of a build up and backstory or maybe a reason why he acts in a certain way with her. but when you have another female mentioned from school and he plays paintball with 8 friends... you know his social skills are not that lacking.
for the female lead I think she's very pushy and wants to be a man and as you see she's doing it because the role she is in. there is reasons and it works and maybe some backstory? who knows just keep making those chapters.
in all if you can spare to read this ugly post of mine then you can read this book. I give it 4 stars and I hope to see more.
A book that emphasizes on the importance of religion/God. So cool. As a Christian myself, it's definitely something that interests me. Also I love the Bible quote at the end of the synopsis.
Library of Heaven's Path was excellent, so in trusting the author I'll vote his next novel highly to boot. The first few chapters are well written, so it should be worth checking out.
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I am just giving up. The story is just depressing to read. I understand the point of the story. I understand why everything is happening the way it is. It isn't that the story doesn't make sense.
The story is fairly well written with consistent updates. The pace of the story moves along at a good clip as well. The issue really comes down to the character design and world background. Both of these are intrinsically linked due to the primary antagonist, Heaven, also being an integral part of the world design itself.
It just isn't fun to read. Who cares if the MC is overpowered if things are manipulated by Heaven so that he never has a real challenge? Who cares if the MC's Dad is one of the strongest beings in creation if he just allows the other strongest beings to harass and ultimately kill his children? Who cares about the MCs goals if he destroys himself in the process?
The entire time I was reading I was just waiting for the other shoe to drop, for it to feel like the MC was actually making progress. After 100+ I am done. The story is just depressing and not fun. You know that every time he gets close to someone they are going to die or have their life ruined. You know he is never going to stumble upon something interesting unless the purpose of stumbling on it is to hurt him.
Tragedy: "Tragedy is a form of drama based on human suffering and, mainly, the terrible or sorrowful events that befall a main character."
This story really needs a tragedy tag so that people who don't want to leave in a worse mood than they started can avoid it.
a very good novel, glad I discovered this story right now. like you already know this story contains mature content, that's also one of the reasons I read this and I'm quite sure many other readers also read because of this matter.
firstly, the plot is good not all about ***, but still for me personally, author the proportion between normal chapter and *** was not that much hope the author can increase and make it more constant like 18-25 normal chapter to enco.unter *** chapter. also hope author can make it kinkier and full fill our reader's fantasy, after all, it's the point of writing and reading a fantasy novel. so far ****** with the aunt is already hot . but mc need other like cuckold other powerhouse/enemy, duo sister and many other fantasy
Well i really want to read everything here its just that i am too poor to afford the coins as i cant use money because im still a child
I found little to no typos. The writing is clear and easy to understand.
The world is interesting, there is a sense of discovery.
The characters feel real. There is clear character development that I hope to see even more of in the future.
I found the story to be engaging and fun. There is a certain amount of suspense that keeps me on edge and wanting for the next chapter.
The chapters could be a bit longer.
All in all, I'd definitely suggest anyone who likes this genre to give this story a try.