the MC is basically... not a person? has no motivation, randomly goes to where The Plot is happening, and the story just feels cheap? like I could not care any less about any of the characters, they all just feel super flat
Garbage waste of time
Read the first 10 chapters and can’t stay interested in the story
Have no idea what the writer is trying to convey to the reader considering most readers don’t have a through knowledge of Chinese mythology
Maybe the writer had an interesting idea and plot but unfortunately with weak start no one would stay and suffer to read it
Another one of the author's amazing stories I love it
Read up to chapter 184 for now.
Sadly the MC gets blinded by power. Making 5-year olds from clan work hard. Using public military funds for the growth of his own personal forces and clan. Not only that, but also framing with a death sentence a quite strong loose cultivator who has not done anything wrong except refusing to bow to MC and become his lackey. Maybe in some jungle law cultivation novel that would seem normal, but in this one, there are rules set by a big sect in which families can't murder and plunder weaker families as they please if they don't break the rules and the big sect also made restrains to big families so that loose cultivators and weak families can live rather safely and have an opportunity to grow despite so many things being monopolized. MC's family survived for as many as hundreds of years pretty much only because these rules were in place - despite being in decline, the environment seems to be quite stable and relatively safe, at least for the last 10-20 years there have not been any beast or evil cultivator attacks against them.
As it is portrayed, MC does harm to others for no reason, seems like a tyrannical villain and a hypocrite.
There was a case where MC stole some families' business and one of the more desperate family head retaliated out of desperation - because the business was too important for him (his fleeting breakthrough opportunity depended on that). MC basically cut their line of income and then made them a scapegoat ,,to scare monkeys". Of course, the family was not some good-hearted family, but hey, it could be solved another way. Especially when, after 50-100 chapters this amount money was nothing in the eyes of MC..
When other big guys asked him to join them, they didn't threaten or oppress him or his clan. Even when he refused, they either gave gifts or just dropped the topic. But when MC gets refused, he ,,feels uncomfortable", ,,his face turns ugly" and so he frames the guy who didn't want to be his lackey into... death sentence. Of course it later turns out the guy was a spy, author's attempt to glorify MC I guess, but MC didn't know that when he framed the guy. If he wasn't a spy, then he would end up framed too..
There's also that thing with Izumo slaves (Japan?). Izumo mortal women are treated as if they were not human, and even their memories are wiped out. And then.. these women become integrated into enemy's country (MC's) as wives and concubines of mortal families in clans to give birth to children with spiritual roots and so on. Why treat them like slaves when they're integrated into your family and give birth to your clan's cultivators? What if her cultivator child learns what his mother went through and decides to go on a revenge spree? There are already many such novels where MC avenges his mother by wiping out such family....
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
I really wish the update frequency was higher but that's just me being greedy. I'm sure the quality would take a hit if the frequency was higher. I don't want anything to compromise that. It's hard to judge at 20+ chapters, but 5 stars is my review based on the potential of the story as well as the quality of the chapters posted so far. I'm waiting for new updates with bated breath quite impatiently if that's an indicator. [img=update]
I read SGS and of that novel is aby indication of your writing ability this is going to be really good
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I know that you're a beginner so good luck!!!
I have high hope for this novel
Strong female lead wrapped in the brilliant aura of the story.
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Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong
Ouch my eyes. The plot itself is barely followable and is just a mashup of tropes, while the writing itself is nigh incomprehensible due to the lack of grammar and structure. I can easily get the gist of what is going on due to the 1-D nature of the characters, but that doesn't forgive any of the egregious flaws.