I would commend you for your fast writing skills and uploading skills if you were the original author who actually wrote this novel, sadly instead you became a thief who like to use other peoples work as your own, also known as infringement. -1 rep
is not a bad novel... the noly issue i have with it is the whole 3 years old MC genius. i mean, maybe if he was reincarnated or something, ok. but come on.also , translator misses spaces between some words. or maybe that is the work of quidian copy -pasting it from **********... ? who knows.
Writing quality RrrrrrrtttttttttStabilityRrrrrtttttttStoryRrrrrrrrrrrttttttttttttCharacter RrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrttttttttttttttWorldRrrrrrrrttttttFartsama approves ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
I am very angry and dropped this novel. Here’s why:Story Development: The way the MC progresses is at a medium level, never too slow and never too fast. On the other hand, about 150 ~ 250 chapters in. He establishes himself as the lover of the princess of Great Yan dynasty. Originally, he didn’t want to love Princess Zhang Le, but grew feelings for her over time. I felt this was a great development, however, it got a little stale with little to no increase in their relationship other than “hey i like u and that’s about it” - Princess Zhang Le. MC repeatedly gets benefits and returns the favor by gifting Zhang Le precious items (she likes to keep those around for no reason) every now and then. This is where I dropped the novel and got **extremely** mad at the author. ((SPOILERS BELOW))((SPOILERS BELOW))MC goes to a mountain range on his birthday and destroys it to let loose some steam. OUT OF NOWHERE, A WOMAN COMES AND TAKES HIS VIRGINITY, HE DOESN'T EVEN TRY TO STOP IT.H-aha, I hate this part. ZHANG LE FIGURES OUT HE HAD HIS VIRGINITY TAKEN. That’s where I dropped it. This makes no sense and is spiraling downward too far for me to read through.Character Design: Things often seem **too** tailored for the MC. Imagine this: You’re going to visit a person that can tell if you’re good or bad (unknowingly) You’re bad, you’re here to take things and leave. HIS FIRST SECT WAS A SECT THAT STOLE FROM PEOPLE (and his mindset had not changed!) and voila, the MC is labeled as a good guy.World Background: The World Background is like this: Historical figures from Japan are reintroduced to a cultivating world 2000 years ago. Most of the historical figures have survived up until today and have recreated their empires.(Great Chu, Great Yan, Great Qin, etc.) But the story often adds too many historical figures where it doesn’t even know what to do with them.There was a little arc 15~ chapters long about the historical figures fighting and talking! (Mostly talking.) A little arc like this should include some meaningful character/world development, but ended up as tea time for the 2000 year old powerhouses.My message to the author: You had such a great and unique story going, but decided to make it a typical xianxia/wuxia/martial arts story.
The story has a lot of potential and generates great momentum and urgency in the early chapters causing you to really get into it.The problem is the author interrupts that for what is essentially a side quest. Breaking all sense of urgency and emersion from it. Its like someone is running in the Olympics is about to get gold and then hits the breaks to check his phone real quick, only for everyone to gain on him and surpass him.To me breaking that momentum cost the story a large part of its appeal, resulting in a less extravagant rating.The worst thing is that I get the how and why the author did it. Even if it would not have gotten past an editor and instead would have been moved to the day after the mass grinding race before betas end...Certainly the info dump on items that would later exist in the real life game but did not exist yet and the shorter chapters really didn't help things.Thus my recommendation is this: Read the story if you're alright with such mistakes every now and then and simply enjoy a good concept more than the pacing and timing of stories over all.For a novel on webnovel, this has a great concept and nice story, if it sees a worthy editor as a completed story, I have no doubt it would sell as a stand alone ebook.
Great story set in a world of sword and magic(Mainly magic). Has a solid world and power system. This story is still new but its looking good i would recommend this story for people with a littel patients as its currently new with few chapters but will fill up in no time if the release rate keeps up at this rate??
hmmm.... usually I don't do reviews coz the books I read are work in progress but this time author mr. DoF convinced me otherwise.....Plotline is Awesome, there are no plot holes till latest chappu i.e. 100, protagonist for once uses his actual head rather than the lower one, action is good, romance is good, comedy is good, static and dynamic description are great, side characters exist, young master r very rare, power of protagonist makes sense unlike few other games where it's all by being first one to do so, power progression is scaled logically so overall this is a great and enjoyable read...hope my review helps both the readers and the author..........if u find this review boring then why have u read it to end?
I usually love reading novels about games but not this one. I dont know how you can immerse yourself in a game like pubg. It would have been better if the author made the game a fps vrmmo version.
Wow!!! How many more novels will have this Synopsis...............................................................................................
If this novel doesn't get selected, I am fu****g gonna learn chinese just to read this in raw. Thats all i have to say for this one.Peace out.
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEThis is nich and nice man. Hope it gets the exposure it deserves! Congrats on winning WPC! Hehehe, I am waiting for it to reach a million views!
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&%&%%&%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%&%%&&%&&%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%555555555555555&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&-&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&------&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&555&&&&&