Caelorum - Online?
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15 years ago 'The Game' was introduced.

Its purpose was to halt the increasing obesity of the population (and the developer's boredom).

Now the latest generation of 'The Game' is about to be released, promising huge improvements in both interaction and holographic projection quality.

Did we mention our Protagonist was just recently crippled, and one of the main aspects of 'The Game' is Avatar growth through user action.

Only one person suspects anything could go wrong, The Inventor; because he didn't exactly invent anything, so much as excavate a research lab…

Initiating connection…

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"Oh come on, why do the Vorian's seem to love Kill Stealing…"

"Hey Sul'Mar, we were just trying to decide on lunch; you have any ideas?"

*Beep Beep*

Abnormal connection detected…

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Things are about to get complicated, and not just on Earth; but our entire plane of reality.

Summary and title updated - April 19, 2016

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Super funny also nice touch of humour the Mc is not a harem or bump into and make out with every female type thankfully but that’s probably what’s bringing down the ratings besides bots and people who only like the blandest of story’s with an mc that has a harem, is stupid and rapes female’s every chance he gets
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Whoever likes Sign-In Buddha's Palm, vote for this! This is a great, and for-reals low-key OP MC. Although not as low-key as Buddha's Palm, so far there are no signs of the MC exposing himself, or the frustrating 'hinting that the OP guy is actually me.'
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Writing quality RrrrrrrtttttttttStabilityRrrrrtttttttStoryRrrrrrrrrrrttttttttttttCharacter RrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrttttttttttttttWorldRrrrrrrrttttttFartsama approves ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
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Great story overall similar to other works done by this author it’s an interesting take on what the future goes bad for a bit then goes into a higher tech era I would highly recommend at least trying this story if you like more science fiction story’s if you like this story take a look at his others you will find similar quality
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Me encanta, de verdad es una magnífica historia, en un día ya me he tragado la mitad y aún no puedo parar de leer!!!! Es genial!!!!! El problema es que tengo examen mañana así que matadme porque voy mal si sigo así. Demasiado viciante!!!! No la recomiendo si tenéis cosas pendientes que hacer porque engancha muchísimo!
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"Welcome to my home," I smiled at Jake, who was looking around the cafe in awe. He glanced at all the tables to the black chalk wall decor and finally he landed his gaze on me. He cracked a smile, his two little dimples forming on his cheeks. I couldn't help but smile.
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