Bro you should take ideas from Chanakya arthshastra for warfare(not only physical but psychological war ) and not only copy techniques from modern world . You are writing about india. If you just implement all the foreign ideas in the kingdom and not something from Indian culture and wire something new, the book will just become a wish fulfilment type of Novel
I love sci-fi and I really like the authors emotive and emotional driven description of characters. It drives character growth well. Can only see the author getting better at which will only improve the quality of this book.
Great start that draws you in. Some explanations are a little confusing, though I still love it so far.
The Good Friday night y'all are so cute and I have W you are so cute and I have W you are so beautiful and amazing day today and w I love it so much for me and my mom said I was going through my head
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong???
Amazing already love it im currently reading the other book this Author wrote and love it so i know The future chapters will be amazing to ?
Can I just say that I am floored. The way the author grips you with the vivid detail and story is so fast, i found myself not being able to stop until i was current with their work. fantastic description and initial development and creation of characters. Kuddos Sir Author.Please check it out! Would def Recommend. This book is staying inmy collections.
I'm not good at giving review but i'm just gonna say that i enjoy this little chat group of authors xDDid you know that Elyon is actually a lolicon?If you are a small little girl, please be careful around him.Or might as well get ready to call on cops whenever you see him.
It’s interesting so far. There were a few grammar issues that were noticeable in chapters 3-5 that you could improve. Other than that the story progresses nicely. I’m more of a romance reader but I still enjoyed reading this novel. The chapters are short but feel right to the point. Good job and keep improving and it’ll be even better.
It hurts tho you know??
In this story you get the overpowered character quality while also having interesting characters and reactions to the main character! The story is also coherent so far! It's really good. My only gripe is the constant pov changes which I strongly dislike. It makes it confusing as to who I refers to if you happen to forget the one line at the beginning refers to.
Aside from the announcement that made up the first chapter, this story certainly started off running, throwing you headfirst into some mysterious places. Definitely a. good read for sci-fi and fantasy readers.