A Hero's Growth

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everyone  trial read this now and get it through.....or I'm going to be unhappy ,..............................................................................just kidding  pls give it a shot

The story has a lot of potential and generates great momentum and urgency in the early chapters causing you to really get into it.The problem is the author interrupts that for what is essentially a side quest. Breaking all sense of urgency and emersion from it. Its like someone is running in the Olympics is about to get gold and then hits the breaks to check his phone real quick, only for everyone to gain on him and surpass him.To me breaking that momentum cost the story a large part of its appeal, resulting in a less extravagant rating.The worst thing is that I get the how and why the author did it. Even if it would not have gotten past an editor and instead would have been moved to the day after the mass grinding race before betas end...Certainly the info dump on items that would later exist in the real life game but did not exist yet and the shorter chapters really didn't help things.Thus my recommendation is this: Read the story if you're alright with such mistakes every now and then and simply enjoy a good concept more than the pacing and timing of stories over all.For a novel on webnovel, this has a great concept and nice story, if it sees a worthy editor as a completed story, I have no doubt it would sell as a stand alone ebook.

I was very excited about this novel but in the end it turned out that the title and the story are fake as the novel is bad and just an old harem to satisfy the desires of the author

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