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A well executed, generic disciple novel. This is unoriginal but I tend to like these types of novels. As long as you don't take it too seriously you'll find that it's a fairly inoffensive and laid back read. Many generic tropes but the clean execution makes it difficult to have strong feelings (positive and negative ones) towards this novel. This might have potential similar to the other fairly popular Master-Disciple novels out now so I'm giving this a generous score. 3/5
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This is such a good novel. It's incredibly heart-warming, and the writing feels very melancholic. The MC has a system, but from the current chapters, it's much more focused on his relationship with his wife. There is no face slapping, no young masters, it's a slow paced story about a husband and wife. I hope this gets chosen.
I loved the description and I am loving the story so far. the idea I fascinating. Great plot ?
This book has a lot of potential from what I have read, but there are some parts that might confuse some readers, the reason for that is because on some parts in which I was reading there was a change in scenery without notice which threw me off a little bit, but the rest of the story is good.I recommend it
like it so far hope u dont drop it and continue to improve it :) hehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehheheh
Great story. Amazing characters. Love to just read this in my spare time. I've read all the chapters for now and will continue to read because it's just that good. Thank you for make this and it has been a true adventure to read this.
FINALLY we have a good novel with PLOT from this author...this novel has a well balanced scenes of fighting & r-18 & romance & cultivation...
Its also about a reincarnated of great sword master who will do anything to become stronger so no one can bully or look down on him...
Mc still is acting immature and not thinking with his brain but his lower body sometimes ...
And considering this author is already writing 3 novels at once, the release rate of this novel is good.
But recently i feel author is trying to put this novel on drama route...
But in my opinion it's a well written novel which has worth spending time over it.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Thnaks for the novel
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