RAW LINK PLEASE?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Beware: This is your cure to survive NNN.Created by the ever accomplished Meme Master Fixten, this is a story to bonk all horni into oblivion. Do you need anything else to begin reading this book? No, right?Then, starting reading already~!!!......Btw, to those that reached this far, here's something that explains the situation of everyone that comes to read this novel:
I like this novel a lot but, I wish the updates were more consistent, because I want to read more of this great story. Alas, I can't because it hasn't been updated.
A classic example of a good cultivation story. The writing is good and its easy to read and understand. A good example of a rags to riches story what I like more then the basic OP MC
The story is amazing. But Webnovel drops all good novels as usual. Reader’s choice is a joke when only trash with the lowest votes gets chosen.
Good............................................................................................................................................
1-star because of synopsis....................................................................................................................
hello guys this is my second review ;)
first of all this is my first novel. so don't be disappointed in first few chapters, its getting better and better, as a reader I can tell that too. and i want to tell some things before you guys start reading.
1, MC
Du Chan is an dropped out, gangster, and a otaku in his past life on earth, he is a bit childish in the starting chapters because he is in kids body! a 8 years old kid is not an adult! even with his past memories! but everything will change after some chapters. but he is selfish, and evil type MC, you can call it Anti Hero!
2, Story
its strong plot and good i guess
3, Harem
Yes, its harem! but there are no dumb FL's, MC loves his harem more then anything! but he had no weakness to women! he would kill women too!
4, Grammar
my grammar is kinda not bad, you will understand whats happening and whats going on, but it will cause problem to some readers.
5, Updates
yes, daily updates!
thats enough i think, Thanks for reading this review! please try to read this novel too, Thanks in advance! ;)
This novel is not bad!
bit.ly/3LyRF1N
yessss@sssssszzszzxzzssssssssssszssssssszzssssssssssssssZzzssSsssssssssssssssssdssssssssssssddssssssssssssssssssssssoumdssssssaexcitijg... .
The premise of this story is halfway decent, the author had some interesting ideas and tried to pull an interesting spin on an old genre.
The major problem with this novel is that the author utterly fails to express emotions in a convincing way. The MC feels wooden and constructed because he has either too much emotions or none at all. Side-Characters are a lot better, but not really relevant due to the premise of this story.
World building is okay-is, not good, but vague enough to be believable. Differences in planets are almost nonexistent, but again, this isn't a slice of life or exploration type of story.
Pasing is another problem, we either get way to much information about things we don't need to care about at all, or not enough to really imagine what is going on.
Author does our mc get Qi outside the game at some point?
—-—-–––—-—-–––—-—-–––—-—-–––—-—-–––—-—-–––—-—-–––—-—-–––—-—-–––—-—-–––—-—-–––