The Immortal Player

Being an avid reader on this platform, and video games being one of my favorite genres, I do have to say that is is one of the better books here. The pros: the world background, and the characters are quite nicely developed. Although the reincarnation trait is very overused, it is implelemted nicely in this book. Another thing is that the game also has solid mechanics, no logic holes in it, at least none that are huge. Cons: the start of the book is rather slow and chaotic, and might be hard to push through. There are small grammatical errors, and some logic holes. However, none of the cons are very large. In summary, this is a rather good book, I encourage you to read it, and I encourage the author to continue writing and updating this story.

An interesting story with a slow start that picks up and runs well.  Currently on Ch 84 and only had one scene with a 'clique OP moment due to plot logic' however, can't wait for the next release as story is amazing so far and can't put down. Keep it up Master Author *Salute* !

Please continue this novel!!! I really like the story development which is way better than most of the novel I've read and I really hope you can continue it.

literally stereotype chinese overconfidence combined with stupidity i mean hes over 20 and still has serious problems regarding his confidence...

Writing quality is dull and boring. There's unneeded censoring, improper use of pronouns, and unappealing descriptions for skills and ****.

Story development is terrible, it's going at a steady pace but the obvious plot armor is too blinding to look at. There is absolutely no balancing and stats along with skills are just randomly slapped down while the author thinks, "No one is going to bother to calculate anything, so it's fine. I'm a genius for making mobs so overpowered that a lot of people are in an endless loop of crippling their accounts."

Character design.. Oh man, oh ****... Main character is trash for someone who has 7 years of experience while also running a guild/team/whatever you want to call it. I thought, "C-tier? Must of been really behind." But it's quite obvious that the main character is a fucking retard who made his way from sheer luck. Regarding NPCs and other players, their personality and appeal is just as worse as the main character; they're just really stale fluff to add onto the MC's sub-par design.

World background. Almost non-existent. Locations names are just dropped down in text, there is no descriptions to build up on the scenery. "It's a cave. It's a forest. It's a road. It's a village." I wouldn't care if the main character was absolute trash if there was an actual world out there and not some **** that was thrown down on the spot without any details.

Final verdict - Not even worth to read as a throwaway. And why the **** are you putting so much time into explaining the benefits of the beta when he's going to lose everything when the game officially launches? Please improve the world development, a story isn't a story without an actual world to it.

like it so far hope u dont drop it and continue to improve it :) hehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehheheh