I liked the mystery in the story, and the background of the world as well..The annoying thing here is that you mixed the point of view of the first character with the point of view of the second character..that brings some confusion while reading, but I liked the rest of the aspects, By speeding up the pace of publishing, that would be great
There is no cover, why is there no cover! Anyway, I read it and it seems to be kind of action packed. However, there is not enough chapters! Moar! needs 140 characters... 140 140 140.
is this novel dropped ? it has been a year since the author updated ....
the writing is good, story progression is good, I feel cheated by the fact that every paid chapter has the equivalent of half of it being the previous chapter. it seems as though the author is just padding the word.
The synopsis was rather confusing on my part but the story was good. The startup was interesting and the plotline is very planned out. The writing is spot on and the detail is incredible. Great job
Exp exp. Exp exp. Exp exp. Exp exp. Exp exp. Exp exp.
This novel is akin to the fresh air you inhale after being stuck in a really stuffy room, it is kinda different to most webnovel I'm used to reading.
The story had potential but the author pulls the same crap every time, no matter how strong the MC gets, and how many miracle encounters he has, everyone can get stronger than him at the same speed or even faster.
Another thing, I'm not a native English speaker but the author's grammar is so bad I had seen MTL novels easier to read.
One of the best sport novels but it needs more time for the story to get to its best part (3th year middle school and high school). Hope to continue the good work.
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i really hope this get picked, oooh i cant wait for it, but... i really shouldnt expect too much since the bigger the expectations if its not met the greater the disappointment. REALLY THEY SHOULD PICK THIS =∆= , i really dont see much novels like this one where the focus is streaming / webcasting.
another see hint novel, another check in novel what more?
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