This is a good story and the pace is very good. Read it for what is a story, not your personal made up event. i get tired of poeple telling authors how to write their story. This is a awesome read and should be getting more hype. Two thumbs up and keep it going Author-sama…. Oh ya drinks on me served by her. Back off buddy, she is MINE. LOL starts fist fight just because a little brawl always make the drinking better.
Quick better synopsis
Random boi gets isekaid and gets a syatem that lets him increase his cultivation spped if he is near another person with higher talent
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first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense,
don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains,
make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power,
don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money.
if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.
5/5 ヽ(ΦωΦヽ)
Great concept and world building! (=ΦÅΦ=)
I can already see how action-packed this novel is! (ΦωΦσ)σ
Well-written and well-described scenes <(*ΦωΦ*)>
Good job, author! ლ(●ↀωↀ●)ლ
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One of the most amazing realistic fiction! Highly recommended! Although I have read only a few chapters of the story. It has already hooked my interest. Keep up the good work author.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm not good at making a review or opinion. This story is absolutely wonderful and nostalgia. Keep it up, Author!!! I recommended this again. Don't ever hesitate to read this. That's all :)
Great story, the only issue is that the naming conventions are really offputting and having me constantly questioning what I am reading.....
he she, author joins the story, instead of MC sat down (it is "I sat down")grammar is so bad that i skip most of the nonsenseMC arrives in a world of miniature humans to become their god
This is great disappointment for me ...the concept was unique on clishe setting but I hoped it was interesting but there so many dumb action by mc and plot holes and the rich guys who appear too dumb gave my brain migran and seriously lowered my iq ... translation deppects were one of main attraction..as many name were wrong and even chapter 36 and 37 are same
Very good story. At the beginning a bit slow paced but gets better.Writing quality and grammar are perfect.Updates are stable until now, hope it stays like that.