please translate this novel 我为道祖，开创仙道！
Honestly, a terrible novel filled with inherent bias and terrible characters with no sense of fulfillment when reading. Contrasting statements in the novel as mc says he thinks of second life as game but when he reincarnates into the world he suddenly has immense amounts of nationalism for Dragon country aka china.
Interesting premise of a Tower Defense game and the shenanigans that the MC gets up to while being the overlord for his city/tower defense. MC has the fairly typical archetype of being a scrooge while having some innovative ideas and getting by on a decent bit of luck.
The character development currently is a bit shallow but it is mainly the world building phase with a number of different people interacting with the MC so it is understandable.
The MC is a bit unique as his goal within the game is not to earn money - honestly one of the first gamer novels when the MC isn't ridiculously poor/greedy.
The MC instead is 'casual' and aiming to have fun which shows in the novel in later chapters with some unique developments.
The only issues I can really see is the some pretty thick plot armour with the MC getting some quite valuable things very early on - so for people looking at this review I would recommend to not take things to realistically.
The other issue is the setup for outside the game is a bit dull with the dialogue usually the standard tropes you see in Chinese web novels - doting 'aunt' type character, person looking down on MC etc.
The translator has done a good job with a fair balance presented between keeping Chinese slang/proverbs which provides some charm to the novel and keeping things digestible for a western audience.
If you are into video game novels I would say check this out and I hope that this novel gets picked up as I am looking forward to future updates!
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Good terminologies with real like situations. Pls keep updating the story. The author has done some real research and knows about the SF community in detail
I’ve read 20 chapters so far and it’s progressing at a stable rate, also the story has a lot of potential I feel like the character changed a bit too much in this few chapters but over all the story is awesome and has the same amount of potential as your other novels if not more so I definitely added to the library and I’m hoping for releases
Feels like its written by an angsty ****, and the writing quality leaves a lot to be desired, lots of spelling and format errors, desperately needs an editor
Hello author I give you a full star ,I really love it this novel .it's so funny and ,I'm feeling great when I read these.And it's unique story,but strangely that its suit my taste.I really excited to read these novel to the end.I Hope the author are so generous to update faster if you can but if you can't don't pressure your self to much.I'm feeling bad if that happen.Author thanks for the update chapters,and I always waiting for the upcoming chapters,although I'm impatient .I always try to wait,because it's worth my time.[img=update][img=update]??
'Hidden Marriage' rip-off nonsense where every would-be story arc happens in one chapter. Who cares if the original is completed? How hard is it to slap tropes on a page, and I mean a SINGLE page? If we're lucky, a whole story arc lasts almost 2 pages.
This is your typical Green Tea Bish stepmother and her White Lotus daughter plotting against the FL. Her fiance and father fall for it because men in these books have to be dumb as rocks or so OCD that they're 30 and have never touched a woman. After the set up in which the FL is - wait for it- DRUGGED, she packs her belongings into a suitcase and heads to the Civil Registration office to get married on 5/20 because all ***** women hit 18 and plan to marry any old male rag, bone, and hank of hair so long as it's on 5/20 or Valentine's Day.
Jesus take me now. This book is so moronic. I'm tired of even typing this review.
Our dashing ML CEO/billionaire is there to register a marriage with a wise woman who fails to show up. What's a scumbag billionaire to do? I know! How about marrying a clearly drugged 18 year old and having *** twice with said unconscious 18 year old child bride in a Bentley, with a driver in the front seat, while in a traffic jam?
This is lazy arse writing at it's worst.
FL wakes up, slips her dirty butt out of the car while he's outside the car looking for a way out of the traffic jam because I guess he respects his driver too much to let the driver worry about the driving aspects of driving. Too bad he doesn't show the same decency when it comes to marrying and publicly shagging drugged 18 year olds looking to get married to anybody on the most romantic day of the year.
Please don't be on this planet, reading this nonsense and driving and voting and having kids. If you're reading this, you lack judgement and shouldn't be doing any driving, voting, or breeding.
We're on Chapter 8 or 9 now. After the FL left the ML's car backseat/honeymoon suite, she went to the airport, flew to the US, found out she was 4 months pregnant, and it was too late to get an abortion so she didn't. One kid dies at birth and the one that lives is a hideous know-it-all, a snarky CEO trapped in a 4 year old's body because we have to have these sarcastic little monsters that make you drop the book, otherwise the author would actually have to come up with a plot and develop ***** characters who DON'T have to talk through a smarty pants kid.
Seriously, embroider your mask, create drama on social media, snip holes in the socks of the family member you're most tired of quarantining with, learn a language, or teach your cat to bark. Do any of these things - or none of these things - but don't waste your life on this book.
Translator? Epic.
Author ? Lazy AF.
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Great book. The story is really interesting and actually makes sense. The mc actually has a brain and plans stuff ahead. The side characters are also well fleshed out, to the point that some of them feel like the mc. The world building is also really good and the update stability is consistent with 1 chapter a day.