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I liked it good read. .
(MINOR SPOILERS FOR THE FIRST 15 CHAPTERS)This is a novel that i can see blowing up in the future because it has the typical tropes of the top novels especially when it comes to overpowered mcs.This novel is mainly a mindless journey where you can see the mc destroy everybody in his path and outsmart everyone he meets and i honestly like it, i think its fun to read. The novel also has some attempts at comedy which are okay i guess.The grammar is really good expect for a few spelling mistakes here and there which can easily be overlooked.The story isnt top notch mainly because we dont know the mcs limit, we have no clue what his true power is, especially since he has the ultimate plot armor which is the spirit inside of him. I think the main way the author can improve the novel is by letting us see the mcs limit.When it comes to the world development i think this is a factor that is going in the right direction. I like the world that the author has set up so far and i am excited to see how it will grow from now since we are only at chapter 35 at the time of writing this review.When it comes to character development i think this is a very strange factor of the novel. The mc is sometime a cold killer without mercy and sometimes an extremly trusting individual that reveals alot of stuff easily. I think him being cold makes sense to a certain point considering how he was bullied when he was younger, still think its a bit strange tho. But im extremly interested to see how he will react when he finds out about his sect, i think that is when we'll see huge character development.When it comes to characters in general i think that this is a part of the novel that is done very well, each character has their own personality and none of them feel plain although some can reveal a bit too much to complete strangers at times which feels unrealistic and almost like its just a lazy way of giving the mc info without him really earning it.The stability of updating has improved recently, even though the author doesnt upload or is late sometimes mainly because of him being sick here and there which i think is a justified reason for not uploading.All in all i give this novel a 4.2/5 because even tho its a good novel it still cant compare to the top novels of this site like the birth of the demonic sword which has much better character development and story overall, library of heavens path which has much superior comedy and world building and supreme magus which has better character development and a more solid start. But then again all of these novels have had 250+ chapters to develop their story.Im still gonna follow this novel since i do think it has alot of potential and im interested to see how the story will progress.(I will be updating this review in the future if there are any drastic changes in the story or writing quality.)
This is what all books should look like. in just few chapters, you've managed to get my full attention. The tension and suspense is just breathtaking. Work of a genius. More grease ❤️❤️❤️?
Ironically that I am giving my own book a review but I have something important for all to know...I am currently 12 years old. It's 2018. I am in school so I usually only release 2 chapters in each holiday but sometimes I write in math class... As a 12 year old I this is my first time writing a proper book. Each chapter I write should have slightly more words than the last. I accept all comments but no spam. Thank you for reading my book.
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Overall, a very good novel.There’s a nice ratio of serious and lewd chapters, the characters are well-developed, serious thought went into the world design and organizations, and there’s a constant desire to read the next chapter.There are the occasional word-choice errors (scoffed used in lieu of scarfed regarding food is one semi-frequent mistake), but they’re few and far between.
its the best ive found here so far, well done man. .
This novel deserves 5 Stars just because of the cover. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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In the latest chapters, he rarely uses his powers, and the plot is same as one of the stories I read.The competitionrecruitment from a grand elder of another sect who is beautiful girlsome evil sect reviving.selection of talents and ranking them.solving array formation for some elder who'll help him craft his weapon.Everything is the same. Straight plagiarizing .
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