The beginning 100 or so chapters are pretty decent honestly and would have gotten 4 stars or so. The last 40 or so chapters have been so godawful as to drag the entire story down a full 1.5 stars. MC has added several people to his harem for literally no other reason than his 'essence' being magic essentially, seriously. A harem story is not necessarily a huge problem but the last 50 chapters have essentially been an erotica novel with perhaps the worst descriptions of sex I've ever come across.
Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
Read Omniscient reader's viewpoint .... The author probably took inspiration from there............. ....... ...... .......... .. .. .........
The great mighty author here, beware of me lurking around reviews! JkHahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahaha
I've just read a few chapters and I already love it! It's genuinely interesting and making me want to read more.Every chapter of this book is enchanting to me in their own way. Good job author!
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its really good , I love how you began the story am not a fan of horror but I will add this book and follow it to the end love it keep going thank you for this master piece
This is good, please continue!
nothing original and not worth reading horrible played out tropes and stupid mc filing up space and more and more and more and more and more
no arrogant MC , no killing of entire clans,the beginning isn't quite great, but if you go past 10- 20 ch you wont regret it, a slice of life/comedy/action what more do you want?(its gold).
lord of the mysteries inspired so the background is good waiting to see how it goes prety good so far.
I have read King's Avatar before so when I started reading your story, it really reminded me of that reading experience. It is really good. The story is perfectly written and seems to be in sync so far.Although it is a very early review, I must say that your story has high potential.Keep up the good work. :)