Before he knew it, the child's other hand was already clutching on the glow of light which surprised him since the little kid's gaze was still on him. His eyes twitched as he can't restrain the little girl under his control. His past relationships were not this stubborn! Well, besides his birth mother.
40 (2002/07/31)
This story is one of if not the best I ever read on webnovel. The powersystem and the parh the MC takes are unique. The MC ist strong but not straight up OP. So he has to be careful at times and depend on friends or elders and cleverly manupulate them to take them help him. The character development is awsome and he lerns from mistakes and experiences, becomes smarter and more witty. There are NO stupid characters that only serve to push the MCs image, which is very refreshing. The novel in very slow paced which in return gives deep insight into the depelopment of the world, characters and story. The way it is written is crazily good in my opinion and very concise which is pretty rare on webnovel considerring that there are alredy more than 1000 chapters out. The only downside is, that the translator sometimes translates single chapters as if the mc is a girl (uses she/her), but most chapters are ok, and I can bear those that are not because of the story. Overall it is a very very engaging story and I am looking forward to reading more.
I really like this story, it reminds me of eren from the attack on the tittans anime, i just hope its not as sad, and the character building is perfect. Good job author. Sasageyo!
the book is very nice, l like it . .......
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So, It's a good story, nothing too outstanding, but the good translation makes it a worth it read...Didn't find any plot holes as of yet, going to keep reading, to see where it goes...
it's captivating & I got hooked to it & I wish it went on & on...
this book is well worth the read and spending of both it starts slow but picks up well there's a good amount of story and setting detail throughout the book :).
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Overall a very good book to read. Very different from the other books that I have read. The developpment of the story is great its not too slow but not too quick making the story all the more enjoyable.
I believe the story is quite good but the world lore should be explained a bit more as that would lay quite a good foundation for the later chapters. Overall, I find the story quite good.