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The novels you make always make me enjoy them, I'm curious about the way you write your novels, how did you come up with such an amazing idea?
Hey bro, you are one great author if I have ever seen one (though I've never seen you
I don't like a trash mc ty....................
If you are hesitant on whether to read this novel or not.....
DO IT. *romance... brotherhood... family... power*
First of all......
I'm here to say that this novel is actually one of the most deep and "poetic" novels that I have ever read. Aaaaand... I've read A LOT OF NOVELS.
- The topmost reviews are about poor translation quality. The translation quality has no issues (because it has been fixed recently I assume). In fact the translations are just as descriptive as the RAWS. I assure you.
- The characters all have depth. Although the MC is a bit OP and cold with his godsword, he has a bit of background and has reasons for his personality. All the characters in the story have a history that makes them who they are today and the author illustrates that very thing. The author also reveals the background and also the lives of the MC's 'brothers' when they are not with the MC (their family ties/lives, their loved ones, etc.). Each person has a depth to them (including enemies and occasionally side characters). *it's not SAO*
- The Stability of Updates:
the speed should be around 1-2 chapters a day if I'm not mistaken. Although around the time I am posting the review, the translations got suspended because of some transitioning. BE SURE TO CHECK HOW OLD THIS COMMENT IS BEFORE YOU JUDGE because the translations may have resumed by the time you're reading this.
TL;DR:
- The reviews against the "translation quality" are out-of-date. The translations are now very good. I assure you that if you like a smart MC, brotherhood concept, and a but of romance, this NOVEL IS FOR YOU.
You should trust me because I have read these novels every single day for many years. It won't let you down
The world is interesting. However, the MC acts like some righteous person saying that black magic is evil and light is good even though all magic is neutral in my opinion. If black magic is evil then why is Fire magic not? Fire magic is much more destructive then black but they both can be used to help people. The Harem members are complete retards as like the MC due to weird, cheesy dialog that makes no sense and feels forced like their love to the MC. Thus this story makes me feel like I'm reading a kids novel. The author clearly is still an ******* when writing a detailed novel about emotions, perception and the elements.
Can anyone recommend me webnovel like this with tower system , I really likes this novel but it seems to have been dropped by the author for some reason
I like it so much...the author is the best i give it 5 star the characters are so amazing and you can stop reading it so what are you waiting for read it now
The only mistake I could see was Commas placing, nothing else. the words are well chosen and Raith who was expected for big got something that worth nothing (Dust of Death). a new type of power balance is very good, Archons bs Primordials. looking forward to it
Holy potatoes this is amazing! Never expected to find such a good reincarnation story out of the blue! Good storyline and steady progress! The ever-so-slightly humorous writing style wasn't really my cup of tea at first, but now I'm totally in love with this story! Can't wait for more!
If it wasn't for the boring and stereotypical character design, this could be one of the better novels on this platform. Most characters are one dimensional and made to hate/like them. Nice/intelligent people are beautiful while the bad/hideous/dumb guys are fat. This huge flaw drags the whole novel down. It's quite a disservice to the interesting and thought through start that this novel had.
I hope that the author will pu more effort into his/her characters because this series clearly has potential.
Honestly the best cultivation novel I have ever read so far. No flaws, no issues, no weaknesses, just perfect. Highly recommend to atleast give it a try for a few chapters. Thank you author for the amazing 50 chapters.
Yeah, I agree. The grammar is lacking, but the flow of the story is good. This is one of the stories I'm still reading so far. I hope you continue to do your best, Author!
