i have read first few chapters and honestly, the plot is quite interesting, especially the world building is great. it's a great read,Really looking forward to the future chapters..keep rocking
Decently good novel but it is filled with grammar errors and my personal pet peeve getting the male and female pronouns reversed ……………………………
this novel hooked me from the first chapter itself. I love the relationship between the main character and his mother. keep going author.. ? fighting ?
Here's the ACTUAL synopsis of the novel :---Heaven and earth serves as the common residence of all living things, with time being the constant resident since the dawn of creation.As with the difference between dreaming and awakening, the distinction between life and death is unpredictable and cannot be determined.What awaits us beyond time, once we have transcended life and death, heaven and earth?---Not sure why the Original Synopsis wasn't used and replaced by one that looked like it went through bad MTL, or why it's not translated as Beyond Time as many others did (sounds better than Outside of Time and isn't inaccurate, but anyway....). I imagine the Translator didn't have a hand in it.Using 3rd-rate synopsis, Outside of Time instead of Beyond Time(but former works too so more of an annoyance than anything) and a very generic Cover picture... can't say this gives a good first impression from the outside, tbh.A shame, as the content is so far quite good.Let's see where this goes, our dear site WebNovel... and good luck to the translator.
He unkillable soul or body that broken >_> I read it in raw
" I laughed when I faced danger!"?.... No One Can Leave the Beginner's Village???Go revenge of the weakling, use the carrot of justice! ???
I like the novel so far. Very entertaining and fun to read. The novel develops at a steady pace. there are no over explanations that brake you out of the story, which many novels sadly do. I am looking forward to reading the novel till it's completion. I just hope it won't become a harem. It will ruin the story. A lot of authors should take this novel as an example of how writing is done correctly. Keep up the great work. Hope you enjoyed writing it as much as i loved reading it.
Author please check the grammar and proof read the story. The sentences are weird and don't make sense. The idea is great but the writing breaks immersion.
Excellent work, Errors are few to even be found. With the few chapters I've read I've been proved that the book has great potential.
how I live the story? its great.... really great.it's an interesting book, I got reminded by a movie I watched. only difference was that the friends fell for one girl.keep it up author❤️❤️❤️
As others have stated, this novel is very much a slow burn with rather slow progression and more detail on the finer details such as worldbuilding.
Conceptually, I find this aspect of the story most interesting which is very high praise considering I'm more into fantasy over sci-fi/mechs. The level of detail is just right, in my opinion. Though it does tend to stress certain concepts several times, it doesn't feel repetitive unlike in a certain sword god novel.
I noted that certain arcs felt 'slow' at the time, but looking back, they're very much necessary in how they contribute to worldbuilding and the overall plot.
Character development is rather good for this reason as well as being a non-plot-driven slow-burn. Other characters are distinct in their characteristics and dialogue and it's not just a slew of side characters.
I'd definitely recommend giving this novel a shot.
PLEASE I BEG YOU AUTHORRRR. DONT DROP THIS. THIS IS THE BESTTTTTTT
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