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I love how the story is going.
It is really nice
You should give it a try!!!!
I love it!![img=recommend]
The story has a lot of characters and they each have a role which makes the story even more interesting.
It is sad, not many people know this story.
I hope that I will be there when this book becomes famous so that I can proudly say that I have read it and enjoy it!!!!!!!!!!!
Alright, a review. Sure. I will rate this honestly and say, there is for now, basically no world background. It is something that will be done in the future.
Characters: for now, we have a reason behind what characters do and so, they are fleshed out. I wouldn’t Give this a perfect score but it’s not bad for now.
Plot: hmm, difficult. I am not exactly sure what the plot is, but from what I read, it’s About the MC and his psychopathic tendencies That require him to kill people, which he does in nice ways for now. I especially like the torture moments.
Writing quality: some grammar mistakes might appear, but I will try to make sure Noworry releases no mistakes as much as possible. In short: trust my editorial And proofreading skills.
No matter how flawed and dumb he is to be a paragon he must've been pretty old right since his current progress is due to literal hax. Not only that but with age comes maturity so add 17 years to that. He's still way too dumb and immature considering the facts. Shouldn't have made him a reincarnated to begin with, the novel isn't horribly had but it lacks a certain umph. Unlike other major novels I feel no weight at all to his breakthroughs and the cultivation realms. Dropping this after all. At most he's merely a character that acts his physical age for once instead of a 12 year old with mental issues like the other cliches reincarnated mcs. The problems just keep piling up after a point. There's no excitement either. I found myself skipping and speed reading chapters as they were too boring or just simply couldn't hook me at all. Kind of interesting premise but it was poorly executed.
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Its fine i guess
Althpugh interesting thing is that hvisland is a connected word consisting of hvis and land
Hvis in danish meaning if
And land = land
So far the book is really well. Read until chapter 35 and it is really good. The idea behind it is also very well thought off. Love how the male lead and female lead interact with each other.
Hope the author updates regularly.
I really love this story, it's quiet, funny and what made me like it the most are the really cool and well-developed characters.
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I like the story, like the directions its going but i would love to get more release per day . Would be waiting for more updates thanks for the story !
just not a fake or boot licking comment
my top 2nd fav novel considering every novel (1. hero of darkness )
at first while reading the prologue i thought this is gonna be like
again here also he's going to get some trusted friends and fight with them with his gift and i dropped this
after 2 months where i caught up with all current readings i thought why just don't i give a try you have read many more ugly novel ( you probably know ex. cultivation,ten draws, system, rebirth ,etc chinese stories )
but when you go after 10+ chap that blood rush can't be explained in words
except 60th-80th ( gets slowed) after that takes on 6 th gear and with nitro on its pretty dope
here i have tried my best to express my reading experience don't judge it juries...
it's a nice story I must commend,the writing and character development is superb
