I actually had fun reading your novel Author~Chan! Everything was got my mood swinging.
It is vampire= ⭐It has chaotic evil mc= ⭐Great writing quality= ⭐Interesting plot and world= ⭐No harem, No romance= ⭐This a 5 star review my friend. A masterpiece for evil lovers like me. Keep up the good work.
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This novel has a good story concept that I will rarely find in webnovels. starting from the characterization of the characters, the depiction of the world, and the development of the story which did not sooner or later make me like this novel. I hope the author is always healthy, and can write this masterpiece until the end.
This would have been a solid 4 if not for the authors blatant prejudice and racism, his stupid comments about Americans that show that the only knowledgable he knows about us is the propaganda given out by his crooked communistic country that controls all information given to it's citizens and are puppets to their government.
The MC is the slave of the system and the gods. Why would anyone help someone else to become strong to rule them. That's just plain stupid. Why would anyone want to live like that. He just should had killed himself at least should've free from this bull****.
I like it good job man little bit of spelling errors but it's fine. I can't wait to read the rest of the story looking forward to it. Keep up the good work.
This is a compulsory 5 stars rating from the author ;)
Hope you guys enjoy the story. The first arc is pretty much Hollywood Delight on steriod. Just with the power to manipulate time.
All the boring bits are fast pace to get to the juicy parts. Sex scene are plenty, especially ones that I really want to write about. Lots of face slapping and so on.
Kingdom building part is later. Just imagine tanks running over a bunch of medieval knights. ;)
Anyway, enjoy the story.
Ok writing quality is very good. There's few mistakes throughout the novel and the diversity of words is better than most of the novels in this platform
Story development is good at most due to the unique setting. The system is bothersome like many other system novels. Stats and skills generally take up numerous pages. There's a tad of mystery in this novel but rather than being in suspense, eagerly looking forward to the next reveal, I feel myself slogging through some chapters and being slightly frustrated at the pace. I can see the hints and foreshowing and can feel the story building up continuously... and then it became premium so I can't enjoy the greater parts of the novel. My rating is based solely on the beginning on the novel before premium so don't be discouraged from continuing on if you can afford the coins.
Character development is probably the worse part of this novel's start. Some interactions feel like a cheap xianxia, some characters feel unrealistic as they literally don't have a moral compass/ they have an ego as large as the world itself... At the very beginning, I thought that the novel would follow in the footsteps of xianxia novels with the way that they portray their MC and side characters: dumb and dumber. But it was salvaged as the MC feels smarter afterwards. But that's not how the MC should have acted according to his experience. The main character doesn't display the mentality of a person that has been through lots of fights and death itself, just like many other novels of the same genre. He is naive and doesn't think about the effect his actions could have at times, but is evidently better in the sense that he doesn't pick fights outright. And he has a needlessly loud mouth. Isn't he afraid of attracting attention or revealing sensitive information ?
World background is interesting . A mix and match of common themes giving a beautiful balance. Sci-fi + apocalypse + game elements fits nicely.
I started this novel because of its high ratings but it should be rated 4.2 at best. I'm an avid reader of mystery, fantasy and action novels (mostly Western books) so I can say that... The story doesn't flow that well, at least for an experienced reader. But for a first timer, it's a nice read, especially the writing quality and setting and the improvements. I'm giving a 3 since the novel went premium before I could really enjoy it.
At first the stroy line is a bit uninterested but as long as you keep read the chapter, it getting interesting story. The story seems like real life and easy to read. The character development is also good. If you want to read about romantic story, then this book is far from that. However, this book more like telling about how you make money and it so interesting because it feels real and related to real life.
Why isn't this book released out of trial read? Author's another book The Devil's Cage is quite popular here and for a reason. This novel is quite good, do give it a read. Fast paced, action pack with wits, magic and alternate world settings. I haven't yet read the raws or mtl so I don't know about the later chapters but the ones translated are really entertaining. Give it a shot and hope that it's picked up soon.
I am salivating, prepare the feast.
I haven't read it but chapters 24 and 25 put together is 'A friend in need is a foe indeed' and I thinks that's cool. The rest of this is just for exp so don't read it through.