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this story really hooked me up! this is the first time i'm very thrilled with some murder horror and etc. i would recommend this to all ages! really great story!
It is interesting so far.Though it was about VR games but lt about being a gamer in real life. With just the option to increase his status.
The narrative style is different but well written with clear ideas. The childhood nostalgia and the essence of family and values was well portrayed. The effects of loss and grief and the understanding and support from the family and friends were really heartwarming.But there are many instances of tense switches and missing punctuation marks. And I suggest breaking your paragraphs into smaller chunks which will make it easy to read and digest.All in all, a book with great potential. A bit of editing and polishing will definitely make it shine.All the best
Author here, please treat this as a Q/A section.
I loved the movie I know I will love the book
Very detailed character and world development, Great narration and good plotline.I really look forward to the upcoming chapters.good luck to both the author and the book.
I really think this is an amazing Sci-Fi novel and I can't wait to see more is also a really good cultivation novel, a genre I've found myself getting into lately
Anyone else remember the novel that got released with literally 1 vote while this one had like 5 million votes or something like that?……..
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This novel is good,Concept Was good. But i Have one damn Question why the hell u Give this Good Novel to This Damn Translator to do the rubbish Work. When i reading this book i feeling like i am this book on MTL WEBSITE Or Some Raw Google Translator site. So i humbly Request to Webnovel , Plz Change the translator of this Novel..... I Requesting this as a Fellow Writer and Novel Lover........ So Plz...
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
