Mao Ni's? I'm in!Well, its only 2 chapters, but interesting start nonetheless. especially chapter 1 #LolI have a high hope for this story.
story is amazing i really recommend u read it the build up is big but the payoff is amazing love the story and if i have the money i would buy coins for it
the whole concept was always in my head but never read it irl so when I read this book I enjoyed it really much. the whole concept of female cultivator. author if possible don't ever add politics and make mc cultivation freak thank you
This story isn't bad, but there are much better. If those who are reading have already tried Super Gene or Monster Pet Evolution let me warn you that this one is based in those 2 and probably Monster Paradise but can't confirm that. In this things that this writer is copying he tryed to make it seem different but he actually made a poor job trying to hide the similarities. And there wasn't much imagination to create better situations. That being said if the reader can handle this story until chapter 80, they will see some changes and will actually start liking the developments and the later arcs.Warnings: the writer has a clear problem with non standardized women. Always complaining on the "fat/muscular" lead girl.He creates a lot of dead-end and plot-holes. It kinda gets annoying sometimes. Then forgets to explain what happened to certain monsters the MC got and explains it 20 chapters later. Basicly there are some subjects that aren't really explored or have the attention they should have. Then it gets confusing when he explains them further when there are no connections with future situations.Positive points: the world building is actually good. It's the merge if 2 types of story that actually go well together so it has a lot of potencial.And the characters actually show developments and growth.Last statement, taking in consideration the release speed and the writing quality, I think it's shamefull that they turned this into a premium after chapter 100. The story had only started showing good qualities and they already implemented the paying system. It's a good way to say goodbye to the readers that actually managed to handle all the early bad writing and hang on until the good part started.
This is detailed review written after reading all the published chapters (95 chapters).Writing quality: 4⭐ The author has stated that he is not a native English speaker so some mistakes are expected. There aren't that many spelling mistakes but grammatical errors are there. So four stars are enough.Story development: 4.5⭐ A very fast paced story with little info dumps. The author however slows down the story for a few chapters to explain a few things and all that. Overall the story isn't full of chapters in which MC is breaking through or creating pills using different ingredients. After all, we are all culture lovers.Character design: 3.5-4 ⭐ The characters are certainly good and the harem girls are strong and not like those weak girls in Chinese novels. It is mentioned that even the MC is afraid of them at certain times. I would have given more stats but we don't recieve that many character interactions and details until the second volume.Updating stability: 4.5⭐ The author updates seven chapters a week and I haven't seen him missing any updates. However, I would personally like ten to twelve chapters a week but if it will decrease the quality, please don't do it.World Background: 3.5-4.5⭐ Again I can't decide how many stars should I give. At first glance, the world is like any other Chinese cultivation world but later on we find out that it's a little darker than those world's, especially the Central continent. I am still accumulating information about the world and I might update this later on.Overall 4-4.5⭐If you love dual cultivation and harem with a MC who doesn't care about any young masters or royals, this novel is perfect for you. As I said earlier, this is a fast paced novel so you won't be bored sitting around waiting for the MC to breakthrough or creating a pill. I hope that this review helped you understand the novel.
The story and world development is excellent. Unfortunately the main character has a main flow that does not at all correspond to the plot. For example he was betrayed by his fiance hence when he reincarnated he is supposed to be deceive and more wary of schemes right? That's natural. However he is still has this ***** way of thinking. He hates killing even against enemies who wants him dead. At first I thought the mentality will change as the story progresses but it doesn't. Women do the killing for him. It is so pathetic. Yet he expects to get revenge on the woman who betrayed him with these kind of thoughts. I feel seriously sad about this novel. It had so much good potential but the character development was so bad. It is such a shame. If you like wishy washy cowardly MC who lets his harem do the crutial parts then this is the novel for you.
good stable novel , with good character and story development. hope it lasts to the very end ?
I loooove it, i'm gna keep reading, everything about your book says read me and come back for more. Etiquette, good plotting and i just love how you tell your story its just well written,listen im a fan. Keep it up Author.
so far it's a slice of life novel and it's pretty awesome.
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A decent story, I read the raw for it, after a while the story seems to venture away from the original plot though..
I feel like I got baited by the synopsis.