What an unique and interesting story! The beginning of the story is beautiful. The description of emotions is really good. I think is really worth reading! Keep up your good work!
It's like I wanna keep reading since the world that this story is taking place in is interesting and it's got me hyped up but man the grammar is kinda killing it for me. But that's about it, excluding the grammar and overall it's a pretty good story so far from what I've gotten to read.
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I don’t know why there’s so many complaints about errors. Web Novels are meant to be more or less rough drafts to begin with so there will be mistakes.That being said, I dropped this in Chapter 6 since I found the System-MC to be insufferably stupid and unnecessarily edgy. The most annoying part is the novel constantly calls the MC a mega-genius only for him to show no capability of complex thought moments later. Just saying a character is smart doesn’t make them smart…
Good storylines but need to be updates more chapters and ml must show some terrific moves in front of fl. Over all story is very nice for reading.
It's a great story, this Meralman has done a great job ?:The main character is very humanThere is very good humorThe fighting is very detailed and uniqueThe chapters are longThe author takes time for the story to develop at a logical paceYes... I'm the autor
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The author makes the main character hold onto stat points so he can make everything harder and more frustrating for the mc. Literally ruined the entire novel every conflict that he has, could easily been solved by distributing his stat points. It’s just a boring read and an easy opt out by the author.
Wonderful story. Seriously for a story that only have 12 chapters the world building here are really solid yet it gives more mystery! I love the idea of different 'entity' fighting using their human-slave-cult because usually you only see one 'entity'. Also, that insect-like creature that comes out after the curse supposed to be lifted is brand-new idea, love it.The ending feels like a sequel, seriously this can be a mini series this is really good.I give this solid 5*
Very underrated and unappreciated..A great book. Apparently many just decided to ride on the hate train.
A great story , realy well written and so funny ( if you think zombies and blood and gore are funny ?)Sadly the last book is deleated from the author, the story online goes only till chapter ~94 the rest of the chapters are empty. But the story has a closure even if not all questions are answerd.
first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense,don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains,make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power,don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money.if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.