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Real Fantasy Online. The flagship product for the latest generation neural-interface headset. Touting: "The Best NPC AIs", "Better than Life Realism" and "Total Immersion", RFO promises to be a virtual world like no other. But when the line between one's real self and one's digital identity becomes blurred, and the "Gods" have their own agenda, who is the player, and which is the game?

Marcus has played any number of VR games, beta-tested dangerous and unstable systems and lived to tell the tale. He even has a certain amount of fame and influence within...certain circles. He usually disdains the idea of pre-orders and their respective "perks" as blatent commerical exploitation, but this time the bonus is too tempting to pass up. The ability to craft your character's backstory and have it integrated into the game's lore is enough for him to sign up for the Early Access program. He isn't interested in being all-powerful. Frankly, he's been there and done that enough to be bored of the whole thing. Instead, he opts to make a character purely for the purpose of having fun. Things aren't quite what they seem however, and his "backstory" and character class have implications he never would have imagined.

Author Note: First time posting a story online, and I'd appreciate any feedback. Updates may be slow, as each "chapter" will likely be in the 10,000 word range and I tend to revise several times before being (tentatively) satisfied. If people seem to like this I'll try to establish a regular post schedule.

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not bad, I like itThis is Good Compare to other ff that I have read similarly to this.
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For a guy who was apathetic even when he's sentenced to death became a warm goody good guy as soon as he play the game? what's up with flirting around with all these npc? its like he's hitting on to every woman he comes across.. MCs character can change, but shouldn't there be a transition period !here it happened instantaneously. what's wrong with MC to drop his advantages (dude is flame talent but won't train it?? )There's these random characters popping up without propet introduction too. plus what's wrong with his levels?  isn't the prisoners supposed to be beta players !how come there are others with higher levels ! too many inconsistencies for me.  i think it's not my cup of tea. l did liked the concept though. i don't know whether the story gets better in further chapters(i only read up to 23, so this can be considered only as a first impression). nice attempt bro.  really appreciate your efforts.
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All that i saw nice in this novel was the different cultivation system, the rest being cliche and everything other xianxia generic type novels offer. What I see as a shame is that this novel has more fans then The Cell Prison that is something different in the good sense because after a while you get bored of generic bull*hit. Sometimes I question the reading taste of people...don t you get bored of the same type of novel with no innovation, again and again?
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so far I enjoy it I actually really like the decision of trying to flesh out the world building first before getting more so into his individual development that you chose so far. Also really enjoy the fact that he found a companion early and the fact that this novel separates itself from other novels by making the main character a beastkin in the cultivation world. Keep up the good work I think it'll get the exposure it deserves eventually :) in all honesty I wish there was more chapters per week but I know that's not possible for every author considering you know, people have lives haha .
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