I see a few grammar errors but apart from that this book rocks, good job author keep it up!
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Ok updated Review due to my opinion changing, I didn't feel my previous review was quite accurate.Ok first off this novel definitely has a feeling of being influenced by RE:Monster, this mainly shows up in the monster progression as the more you level up in this game like world the closer you get to evolving, only if your a monster race tho. This story does follow a similar structure though where the MC gets stronger through taking a part of the monsters he fights (in this case their souls); However, it deviates in that the MC is required to slaughter hundreds in order to raise one stat point and does not tske any of their inherent skills.The world building is not bad, there are alot of familiar elements but it also manages to retain some of the game like feel through the MC encountering dungeon puzzles which he must solve and a mysterious amnesia which slowly gets cured through his continued investment in intelligence. This means that the MC has a real outsider feel like he's not a natural part of the world or that he has just merged with an alreadynexistung character. This is both a positive and a negative as it means that in the first arc is a bit slow as he has no defined goals other than what his system provides but it is also nice to not have him on a generic revenge quest which so many stories seem to force in to give their main characters purpose.The fights aren't bad, there not to suprisinh alot of the time however as generally the ways he beats the bosses and overcomes his main challenge have been setup chapters beforehand. This isn't necessarily bad it's just a bit predictable.Overall I do enjoy this story and think that if your into a power progression story like RE:Monster or Dragon Evolve God you will enjoy this story.P.s in my previous review i said the world feels similar to Skeleton Knight in another world, no lo ger hold thst viee due to world building done in recent chapters.
Loving the all round story please keep up the awesome story.
i would want to know more about he foes and the history of the story like the war and if the other dragon lords are under antagonist
The story is great and just only a few grammatical flaws along the way but it can practice. Also some usage of words and terms such as for example, the word "drug
really good more please not a lot of warhammer 40k on this app :(
Nice book and a very informative story line
Cool story and all. Long chapters and it’s very readable.I really like evolution novels with op mc but I had to leave once you made mc into a female and refer to him as a she. It’s just not my thing. Like what’s the point of having an ***** man reincarnate if he’s just gonna become a butterfly EMPRESS or QUEEN. Should’ve just made a women reincarnate but that’s just me. Good luck on the story
there is a saying you should be the fan of you first if want to have Manny fan ya there isn't any saying I just made it up so story is old but awesome it was created back when I Was student now perfected with logic but at that time Didnt know about webnovel at all only anime and games so I Did this to fullfill my craving as internet was scarce I Made it like a game with my friends you know I Hated those chinies manhwa which was amazing but had so Manny flaws and cringe things yet I couldn't find more zombie content so writing one also feel free to suggest i am newbie writer i am just writing what i would love to read so no long plethora of things describing same thing I hated partially because it would fill the chapter up when I had to pain strikingly gather pass and coins ( specifically shadow slave and lotm but it did make whole lot of things amazing and also it helps author to earn man authors really struggle it's really isn't easy to write when working on job and I Always feel fatigued to write
The more I read the more it's keep getting better.... keep up the great work.
It's a really good concept. The writing is quite smooth and not that many grammar mistakes. Character design and world background are equally as good. But the update speed is a little slow. This is one of the more enjoyable books that I've read.