This novel is ok as at chapter 103, the world background was ok,the story is good. But...There is alot of problems with the writing quality, alot of errors with the writing plus the story lacks detail in a lot of ways either with the quests, classes, equipments and even the story plots. For instance how long did the tutorial last. MC made a comment to the new initiates dying of thirst in the early chapters but we never saw this happen. The quest for water was a total flop, the group went out once and that was it no further updates. Though I assume it was a failure but after that was another plot and then the end.In shot Author needs to develop story better - more details.
(originally a reply to someone review, just decided to repost it) I don't know why either, it's really strange. Everyone seems to like the story because mc is evil and that's it. I can't find a complete and decent review on this place. I'm in chapter 16 now, how far have you gone? I'm worried mainly with the possible lack of explanation to things, and the fact everyone that made a review above 4 stars is brainless and other than some: 'evil mc, gud story' 'story is gud' 'me like it' '(various emojis)' 'this is well thought' and the like, I found no review with a high number(of stars) and that's also saying good and bad things the story has to offer. I myself find the story to be bad just a few chapters in and unless it changes there is no reason to keep here... but I don't want to waste my time when it looks like it won't change. And I don't mean to get a good mc, before anyone says that.
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Another good story!The synopsis have a lot of contradiction, It makes you wonder which one will it be.I like how the character is, Reigan and Celine... I wonder how the development will be...Keep it up, author. I will wait for your chapters.
Great work ?
The level of depravity is too much....I mean why would you go after a child. Hope you do better in a different novel.
What level of plagiarism will we have in this work? I've seen about eight of the same works so I'm betting on the sixth level. The original work has already disappeared, swallowed by abbreviations, name changes and increasingly stupid villains. How many chapters until the villains are so irrelevant they don't even have a name?
I get tired with 2-3 sex chapters reading continuously but he is writting like 10+ chapters even for 2 girls. And repeated sex scene in those chapters with different girls name only... Too boring.
trash
Love the work, Its good and am looking forward to more.
It's a very good read for me as I was not missing the little things that make up this story as it was written out pretty well, hope I can read more!
This story is pretty painful to read. Just the intro with the betting everything is painful to read.The story is also so painfully Chinese it actually hurts my eyes, it almost feels like a mockery of Chinese culture so it just makes me confused The translation is meh, I have to do double takes more than I likeThe Mc is pretty dumb and has the classic annoying Chinese mc tropesThe world is incredibly generic even by light novel standards