The story captivated me. The character development was very interesting. Despite the inconsistency in the translation, it didn’t detract from the story. I would recommend it wholeheartedly. However, I wish someone would edit it!
Actually really good.
A great start, love the novel so far just hope there will be stable releases in the future, keep up the good work! (also hope that there will still be chapters with him getting better physical stats later on)
The novel is... OK?
The starting was quite fantastic and the ideas are quite good.
The main problem here is why would author post useless chapters without any contents? Asking readers to read somewhere on another platform?
I really hate it. There is only 'The chapters 1 to 25 or 26 to 50 are posted on Bla Bla Bla' made me mad!
Why would you post chapters here? I feel like that you are using this platform as an advertisement for gathering readers.
Note: I have read only first 45 chapters only.
Now comes the review about story. The problem in this novel is:
The main problem here is every'thing' distains MC. For god's sake, he's someone from a huge background but from the very start, even the mobs and side characters are showing distain and I'll intent toward MC as if he's a beggar and useless person.
Evey single place, Every single event, MC is distained by people and MC and his supporters do not do a thing or don't even know a thing.
My head hurts while reading such novels! Why would you write something like that? Is MC a mascot? Is MC a goody guy who spares everyone? I can't say...
The background is very confusing. Is he someone with strong background? or is he from a normal/mid level background? Everyone distains him and makes me confused.
Then the world background is also very confusing. What are the ranks of Aristocrasts? One guy says he's from Gu or whatever empire he is and show distain to MC and it turned out that he have a weak background. He was acting so arrogant that I felt that he had same background as MC. It's so bad that it started to kill my remaining brain cells.
The chapters are messed. Some chapters are available on one site, while some are only available on other sites. It's so troublesome that I had to switch 3 different platforms to get a good amount of chapters to read.
Seriously this is a diamond....
I like how MC using his brain but when needs his strength is good..
And i like the supporting character....
Nice start love it please don’t drop this author you are talented
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapters please
Good story so far, looking forward to the MC leveling up and the evolution of the world throughout the story! I like his family and am looking forward to their restaurant:p
paragraphs needs to be spaced out, naming sence is horrible. should have stuck with original names and simplified things more. overall this is a good story but it's hard to follow in the beginning.
To everyone, I have a question: How do you delete a novel after you written it because I'n sure some of you have seen the novel Secrets Of Existence so I want to remove it because I accidently created a story while thinking for a name which I came up with later called Lord of All Existence. Anyway since it is my frist ever novel written by me. Please take care of me and please for whatever person, thing or culture you find precious, don't judge me too harshly. Cause I'm under pressure and am only a Graduating N Level Student.
Good novel........................................... good novel.............................. **** this 140 characters review condition........... pls get this condition out........................
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Good story so far. The plot is unique and interesting. But I think the author needs to edit the format because it's not optimized for phone users.
First off, I read a story about a Panda; a frog; a dog, and even a Lilypad. Also a tree. Here's one about a Bamboo. How could I ever. Anyways, I love the story and all the others you create; but this one specifically is so engaging. It screams you 100%. Keep it up and keep making us smile. I could get lost in this book.