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I read raw of this novel till chap 200.. The novel is great but the mc's character/attitude is a bit naive its makes me fell irritated for some reason.. Mc's Character design is like most japanese anime mc.. Childish/naive
Very interesting, adds a lot of new ideas to the world of cultivation. I would think things would progress differently and the cultivators would be far more aggressive but overall I think the story is decent.
I Love this story! I should use one more word to explain it.
AMAZING!
Author Keep up the good work and take the time you need!
I'll be waiting patiently for more!
This review was left by 'your biggest fan'. (Self Proclaimed) YoungJustice.
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The novel is quite good. The MC desired to cultivate is understandable. The background characters act quite reasonably.The MC has a very powerful artifact but he did not actively use it and stride to increase his power with his knowledge and hard work. The subplots are surprisingly decent, some problems the MC has been resolved quite naturally and did not feel like force conflict. 60 chapters and not a hint of romance, it's a good chance of pace.
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I rly like this novel, got quite a few original takes, an original writing style, good character designs.what I was mostly surprised about is that the author seems to know his games, haven't rly seen any flaws that rubbed me the wrong way, which is pretty rare for a webnovel book, especially in the gaming genre.There are some lose ends in the story, development, world setting, but like I said no real flaws, it's gonna be the authors choice how he is gonna knot them up later. He also took up some other difficult approaches which shouldn't be easy to write flawlessly, but till now everything seems good. I,m really interested to see how this novel gonna develop.now... negative aspects, there aren't rly anything obvious, maybe the story progression is a little on the slower side. But something keeps constantly bugging me, the novel is rly amazing, but reading it is more like a relaxed read, it amazes me, but it doesn't make my blood boil, anticipate new chapters, burn with enthusiasm like some of the best reads of the hundreds I had. And I,m not quite sure where the problem lies. if it's the progression, or the battles, or the simple but on point writing style which makes it more relaxing.or maybe it's cuz the setting was a little vague and the happenings right now are all still mysterious and I couldn't build a connection yet.hmm... I think it's the last one. well let's see, I might update this in a few months :pgood luck author, keep it up
Absolutely loved this book from start to finish. I live in the same area this book is based so it was fascinating and exciting to hear places referred to that I could actually picture in my mind's eye. The character development was cleaver and enjoyable. A genuine page turner!!! Looking forward to the next piece of work from the author.
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