Writing quality is 5/5. Update stability is 5/5 Story development is 5/5 Character design is 5/5 World background is 5/5
What more can I say?
Yes I am a serial reviewer. Bite me.
i know i shouldn’t be reviewing my own book, but i think this would be a nice read for people who like sci fi and fantasy! i hope this gets around to people too!
i haven't read it yet, but it's looks promising I added it to library . I will just wait until 50 chapters before i start reading . don't give up on this, like your other books.
Ignore the trolls. There is a crappy anime and manga. Some watched that and got the wrong idea. This is an interesting novel that combines cultivation with magic and a modern setting. It does take a little bit to get into it. I think this story has a fun mc with a lot off good fight scenes. Are character has an advantage. Most people start off with one power and then gradually get more as they level up. He starts off with two. I like the waxia elements with the modern setting. Give it a shot.
Well, it has a nice start. The writer needs pick up on delivering more chapters. I think story has some lengthy potential to become a long nice story.
Okay, I'm going to be completely honest here. I'm not much of a reviewer but I'll give it a try. The title attracted me here but I was skeptical after I saw the genre.
I mean yeah it had the name of one of my favorite protagonists in Its title but I thought, should I read a novel like this just because it had the name, Ragnar?
Then I gave the first chapter a try with the aim of leaving it once it wasn't to my taste but I was shell-shocked by the unexpected familiarity with the Vikings movie.
I had to check once again to confirm if I wasn't reading fanfic but still the author was able to develop a wonderful novel that just shows how much he loves and knows about the world of Vikings.
Writing quality is top much with no grammatical errors so far as I have read which is sadly 40+ when compared to the current 89 chapters it has.
I've been glued to my seat ever since I started.
Update stability is pretty good as it is consistent.
Character development is just wonderful as we follow the growth of both Tyr and Bjorn.
The novel is just spectacular as I it makes it easier for me to visualize a lot of the characters in the novel, enabling the world background to flow easily to the story.
Love how you were able to give so many characters enough screen time in the novel.
Even lagertha also
To The Author,
Kindly continue the novel
Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Suit with best material with lots of best defense enchanments,
A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine -
Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,)
Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts)
Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery.
Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine.
Make Mutants into Meta-Humans.
Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters.
Hope to see these soon!
2. Since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse.
Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people and future heroes in Avengers Academy(Combining all Kamar Taj, Kun Lun and other hidden academy/Sects) Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation.
Also make him transport Asgard on Earth as a part of the planet.
But before he do so make him change Earth into full pollution free planet in Rich nature energy( Combine with Ki, Chi, Mana, Cosmic Energy).
*Bring Yao(Ancient One) Soul back from Dark Dimension also make her immortal and ageless, oly making her stronger over time.
[Last, just a small suggestion make MC and Yao(Ancient One) fall in love and Married.]
Thanks!
- Reader.
absolutely loving reading this book I can't wait to see what's going to happen next please hurry and update more chapters
This is really refreshing. Just when I get tired of all these MC with "Systems" going on a power trip, I see this jewel. The daily life interaction or switching perspective the other readers consider as "filter" is actually a good break between plots and sets up the next one (Except the calligraphy one! The was cancer trying to die).
Good love the evil MC and story.
Love the villian MC
a different type of storyline , will be sad if it don't move past 40 chapters I need to get a good ending. so please pick this one , ......
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im curious about this novel but it’ll probably take a while to get released. i also hope the mc isn’t a beta and is a true anti-hero.