"I still managed to live a flamboyant life. I did everything I wanted. Perhaps
pretty good , diverse personalities of the harem and cute interactions between them. Worth a read.
author I just realised something you can try to improve on or maybe you have in later chapters since in currently at 260+. The sentences or rather the way the characters speak is too formal, sometimes it feels cringy and automated, no one speaks the way they do with so many words, the way to speak and the wordings don't feel natural. I'm very adept at English (even though I know it' may not be your first language) and the conversations feel like I'm reading a Shakespeare book most times. for example in chap 278 when Alex finds out about artemias plan to use him, what he says in reply to her question was honestly just too long with so many unnecessary words in between, it's even worse for artemias reply. You should try making the way they speak more natural, using common informal English lingo and having less words while still passing the message across. Just think about contemporary English (American/British) movies and series and ask your self, if these lines were to be acted out , would they sound off to a listener/watcher or would they sound so smooth it wouldn't even look like acting, would anyone speak this way casually with so many tedious words?. I think that'll help.
Love the story so far cant wait until more gets released.I followed the authors brother and now im here and dont regret reading this,You should give it a read.
Good for the time being will know more about in future chapter
Oh wow, that took a dark turn, haha.I love how the MC changes so much, highly recommend.
With an intriguing plot, interesting characters and immersive scenes, this book is a gem! Looking forward to read more! Author, please update soon!
It was an absolutely gut-wrenching story. Every twist hurt more than the last, and you won't really get HOW much it hurts till you read the ending chapter. Everything is miserable in the most well-written way and as a person who pretty much lives for angst, I live for this.Legitimately, I forgot that this app even existed till I remembered this book. Tbh the only reason I keep coming back to Webnovel is FOR this author's works. Thanks a lot for bringing us this masterpiece man. I'm not even going through the same thing as the MC is but it's still comforting somehow.Though the beginning parts might have been a bit cliche, I can't even imagine how it went from that point to where it is now. Man, I love this book
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mc tem centenas de anos de experiência de combate e muitas habilidades, uma máquina fria e assassina. mas como sempre acontece, ele age igual um babuíno e não usa nem 10% do tem e sempre se mete em problemas.recomendo humildemente que não leia isso
This novel is good. Very recomended. The story about game RPG. Exciting. And, the novel is complete so you can read anytime and continous. Oh my god, when 140 character ia finish
Hi, author, I'm wondering your work is so good and you don't have enough ratings. Hey guys who read this I'm encouraging you to at least dropped a few words to our dear author it helps him motivate more by your ****** words. Fighting author?