PrimordialTruth
Translation quality seems pretty good so far, so it's quite easy to be immersed into the story early on. Plot is a breath of fresh air and is fairly interesting. Quite an enjoyable read overall. Definitely recommend checking it out.
I cant believe that this i the soul land 2... oh my ghad.... i cant wait to read it and also for the next chapter TT_TT...........................
The update speed is a little slow, but I really love this MC. Too many reincarnated MCs want to keep a low profile, but not this guy. He's the kind of guys that kills a thousand men with every step and takes zero bull crap from his enemies. I hate when I have to put up with crap from some minor villain for a hundred chapters before the MC does the needful, so this novel is really refreshing.He's also loyal to his own and treats them well.If I had to complain about anything, sometimes the MC seems a little stupid, but it hasn't been a problem yet and doesn't seem out of character.
To be honest I like the story background but the inner writing I don't like it. Reading the first volume I think that the first disciple has no respect and gratitude for MC as her master, it's more like a casual respect not like a nascent soul stage cultivator master should have.
Everything is good and I loved it that's all but i also wanted to see him dabble in different skills well as he is immortal, we will be able to see that in the future. Good work.
Golden spoon and plot armor. What is a point of novel with mc who can see ODS/tips about business that result in 100% Succes in investments.And on top of that after doing 0 by himself, he still go full face slapping on others. Its 100% system do it all for mc type of novel.
The story is goodThe mc is goodThis novel give me vibe like kaguya mangaI hope this would get voted later onPlease try to read this novel
This has massive potential and I would love to see this develop. Give it a shot. I honestly didn’t think i would like it at all but I’m glad I did because I’m hooked.
nice story, at least the initial part. it looks predictable but i think author has more plans for the story, well this is my take on the story read this for something new.
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goodlion here r some tips if u like to have some : -->Make jake buy Golden State Warriors team - (from wikipedia) On July 15, 2010, Lacob and the group of investors he headed agreed to buy the Golden State Warriors of the NBA from Chris Cohan for $450 million, requiring him to sell his minority interest in the Celtics.[11] The Lacob - Peter Guber group won out over a dozen other bidders for the Warriors, including Oracle chief executive officer Larry Ellison, 24-Hour Fitness founder Mark Mastrov and Texas billionaire financier David Bonderman.[12] He had been a Warriors' season-ticket-holder for about a decade.[5]--> Make jake free agent after contract with lakers ends to let him have more freedom and make 1-yr or 2-yr deals.. first of all, let jake help spurs for stealing their 2 championships with lakers as a free agent--> let jake buy marvel shares before iron-man1 shooting
Of course I'm giving myself five stars. I would say this is the best story ever written, but this is the 2nd novel I've started. So I suppose we will say it tied for first place with my other novel! Haha, in all seriousness please leave reviews with your thoughts guys! Thanks!
